Black Poetry : Tonight

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Sep 21, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A single scented candle
    Provides a single ray of light
    Smooth jazz from the stereo
    Fills the air tonight

    Heated oil rubbed on your back
    Soft kisses on your breasts
    Love loving you like that
    Feeling you respond
    As only a woman can
    Excites the very core of me
    In all the ways that make me a man

    Warm Sherry Wine
    Its taste upon our lips
    So much said in loving silence
    So much felt with our sweet kiss

    Being with you, this way this night
    Makes us whole
    Makes us complete
    Together
    Our bodies move in unison
    On and under satin sheets

    In each other's arms
    We hold on for dear life
    Releasing all that is good
    All that is right
    Silence is broken
    As we make love tonight

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!! BE

    MAN ITS GONNA GET HOT TONIGHT I SEE
    WELL DO YO THANG AND SAVE SOME FOR TOMORROW!:D
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey BE...How you keep flowing like this bruh....This is too tight!!!
     
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    Mercy!

    Got to love it! This is some of your best stuff--I like this flow and the senmtiment behind it--well done--Ra

    :confused: Is Religion to blame for the WTC tradgedy? Stop past and read a different view of the World Trade Center Crisis--http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=4105
     
  5. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my Poet Brothers.

    BE
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I

    say that all I can say is...this is one lucky lady..

    K
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    be, this is quite nyce, dear poet. i'm always lovin' yo work. continue to scribe, as i continue to watch.
     
  8. ladyx

    ladyx Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE, Heartbeat, Bruce H. Edwards, sir

    I'm watchin, too! This is beautiful...as always.


    x
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Delicious"
     
  10. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A delicate love flowed with peace poet as only you can deliver

    *satin-sheets*

    :toast:
     
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