Black Poetry : TONIGHT

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tonight my beloveth
    i wanna hold u closer
    and pour my love deeper
    tonight U and I enterlace
    in rapture of compassion
    as my affectionate body
    cover u in warm embrace
    as i trace the heart within
    ya soul and whisper how
    deeply i loveth thee

    Tonight my sweet
    let me fulfill yo fantasy
    and enter ya thoughts
    for a bliss of love
    let me hold our secret
    in the feverish moment
    and complete the day

    Tonight sit beside me
    and let yo mind run free
    as i touch yo erotic pleasure
    take to a place of estacy
    under the candle light
    from the tempo slow jazz
    and my single kiss
    let me shower u wit the
    lace of my love and caress u
    in this rapture of hope

    Tonight my beauty
    let me take u into this tyme
    as our small seed of love
    grow as i feel yo emotion
    with my poer of explosion
    as the distant sound of da
    carousel as it take us cross
    the skies of reflection

    Tonight let's hold hand N' hand
    see face to face embracing
    feel heart body and soul
    as the spiritual love mend as one
    tonight my belove come closer
    so i may live with u in age past
    while magical love taken in fast
    merging together so we may last
    and vast in my space above
    with this thing called love
    let me dewell and drown inside
    your beauty and love

    Tonight baby heed the call
    of eternity of everlasting infinity
    and maybe just maybe
    this time you can love me beloveth
    and when it's all ova remember
    mostly that i loveth u
    so tonight let me in !!!!!!
    :luvv:
    :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts3: :blowkiss: :blowkiss: :hearts2: :hearts2:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew....You know, I have read many, many pieces on this site, talking about love in all its splendor. But this, has got to be one of the most beautiful pieces I have ever read. There is no way in God's green earth she won't feel the passion brimming from within after reading this. I'm beyond words so all I can do at this point is....
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  3. SoothinDivinity

    SoothinDivinity Active Member MEMBER

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    What a lucky lady! I loved the way you wrote this one. Keep it coming....O and I hope you and your lovely lady had fun that night. :)
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you will definitely reep the rewards from the work you put into this piece. from your piece it looks like you are doing well. glad to here it
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    watz......yes indeed it was one that river out from deep inside
    big thankz sista for the warm words and love to a heart dropping flow

    soothinDivinity......big thankz as the love flowz in rapture of thy beloveth
    indeed it's the way any man should loveth his Queen

    phenomenalwoman....thankz a million for the support & love surely
    my heart hope it's a return reward of thy love .

    peace unto ya hearts and joy to yo smiles y'all thankz ...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tonight is ours and ours alone
    tonight is the night of us
    tonight me and u in the pool of
    love and affection divine tonight!
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was awesome...I could feel the vibe strong and deep this was from heart and soul poured in a awesome scribe....now this was a dose of the Rich kind...sweet loving calm and warm...Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's in the air and swoopin down fast
    thankz Angel for the love and support sis.
     
  9. LibertyLady

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    what more can i say....
    the lady,s already said it.....




    so i say it in my own way....






    this is a warm and beautifull piece.....




    it gives us light ....to see in the poetry of brothers here on this site..
    have love and warmth and passion in their heart that they give to their woman and queens...

    thats a good thing to see...
    and hear...


    there is hope lady,s there is hope....








    lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  10. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you got it bad brotha, but you wrote it down oh so well. beautiful scribe.

    Lyr1c
     
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