Black Poetry : Tonight

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartfelt, Nov 8, 2003.

  1. Heartfelt

    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I called your cell phone in hopes that I would reach you
    I wasn't sure it would happen because most times you weren't there for me to speak to
    But tonight, a wish I had made so many times turned real
    And I was able to hear a voice that calmed me of so many distresses that I would feel
    When I spoke to you, you sounded so calm and laid-back
    In the background I heard you were at the train station, so there was no question to where you where at
    I haven't heard your voice in a while and it was one that I really do miss
    Talking to you tonight made me sit back and reminisce
    You checked on me and asked how I was doing
    I said everything was okay, even though a lot of chaos was ensuing
    I wanted to cry when you answered your phone
    It had been many nights that I did that when I stayed at home
    I hope to see you when you do get back in town
    I know you've been through many things and, for too long, can't stay around
    Tonight was the night when I fell in love again
    The same as the night when my heart let you in
    It's been a while since the two of us have spoken
    To get a second chance at love with you was all my heart was hoping
    There are no words to really express the way I feel for you
    To go back to a love that hurt me is hard for many to construe
    But there are times when we all have our ups and downs
    If you left me once more, there would be no way for me to be found
    I don't know what else to say except that I will always love you
    And I can only pray in the future that you would feel the same way too
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow..
    i feel you on dis..wow
    understand it to..
    much love..:angel1:
     
  3. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    nice piece....i could relate to it
     
  4. Heartfelt

    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you mzblkangel and shUt-Yo-M0uf. Your words of response are much appreciated.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was truely heartfelt......tyte scribe
    felt every line
     
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