Black Poetry : Tonight

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 30, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tonight...
    im vibin to my music
    singin, groovin to it
    im calm, cool, relaxed
    not expectin much, livin in the moment while it lasts
    im talkin to my friends, while typin to yall
    sittin in this 4 cornered room, while my thoughts bounce off the walls
    im sittin in this chair, lettin the radios boom vibrate my body
    i barely write now, i just let this website be my hobby

    tonight...
    i ran into a old flame
    same situation, same game
    i watched alittle tv, let the stars entertain me
    then hit the off button, came in my room, let my music refrain me
    i just had to come on here n read some ill sh**
    u know that type of ish that some real sh**
    that gets in ur soul, so u can really feel it
    gets in ur brain n u read it 5 times til ur thoughts kill it

    tonight...
    im feelin it
    but cant really get into it
    too many thoughts, too many words
    not enuf to glue to make it work
    so im just typin...

    tonight...
    im tryna make it happen
    set out my tomorrow's fashion

    tonight...
    im just gonna let tomorrow come.
     
  2. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i do the same things some nites, nice flo'
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    but tonight u flowin
    poeticly u show it
    as u vibe from da wave
    of ya boom
    scribing ya self from ya room
    flow head was all get dis way
    sometime wordz get in da way
    but poet's know how to cross
    wordz before they lost
    see i feel ya in dem corners
    setting da stage 4 tomorrow
    tyteeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    poeticlyspeakin

    Very nice flow...very descriptive.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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