Black Poetry : TONIGHT WHEN WE CHILL

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TONIGHT WHEN WE CHILL



    Tonight when we chill
    Let’s do something we can feel

    I want to slow dance with you in the rain
    Make love until the sky sings my name
    I want to walk bare foot in the park
    And watch the stars shoot across the dark

    I want to rest on a rock by the sea
    As the moment possess you to wash my feet
    I want to ride bareback on a horse
    Until the sun turns into the moon
    I want to parachute high above the clouds
    So we can watch the earth move

    I want to sky dive against the wind
    Pull each other in to share an intimate kiss

    We’ll end our night on land
    Covering ourselves in jet black sand
    Embraced side by side as we blend into the night

     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this remind me of a slow song by r.kelley and the public announcements called slow dance. check it out and see dont you get the same mood. i think somebody ready for freddy. you know i like valentine cause my b-day come two days after. so i get treated twice. well anyway flo on poet.:heart:
     
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    well let's chill
    slow dance & romance
    tonight in our own space
    as the stars kiss the moon
    to let us know of such groove
    as the whispering winds carry
    ya name in echos to my heart
    let's take this night to do what
    our souls lone to do and spend
    it in comfort sharing the moment
    let chill tonight ma !
     
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    Very Nice.... Cursed Heart

    Slow dancing in the rain. Doing things you can feel. How real and wonderful.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey girl, thanks for the love,
    My birthday is on valentines day, I'll be 30! and by myself this year!
    But I am going to make the best of it no matter what!:heart:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Thank you for the love hodee!:heart:
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice
    Nice.!!!!
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Ibrahim:shades:
     
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    I'M FEELING IT
    I'M FEELING YOU

    LOVED HOW YOU MAC'ING HERE POET

    PEACE
     
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    TIGHT POEM MAKES ME WISH IT WAS RAINING RIGHT NOW. KEEP DOING THE THING CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.
     
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