Black Poetry : TONIGHT pt.II

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tonight in harmony
    let my love spool deep
    and the foreverness be
    captured in essence of
    your beauty my belove

    Tonight be not afraid
    for my love is comfort
    and the gentle affection
    will cover u in protection
    let us drive back in tyme
    to our secret place and
    go into a fussional maze

    Tonight sweet lady
    let me look deeper
    and feel the radiant
    love u pose and carefully
    listen intently as u speak
    as we spiritually rise above
    in this desire of compassion

    Tonight let your smiling face
    be beautifully like your visage
    the image of perfection and
    let me hold ya heart as u hold
    my deep soul lace tonight let
    me trace the core of ya beings
    let me bath u in my love my dear

    Tonight yes tonight behold
    instill in this rapture of love
    and fulfill every part of yo desires
    let me feed u the beauty of love
    and let our seductive bodies gain
    light from the shadow i so loveth u

    Tonight can u be my foreverness
    tonight will u allow me tyme & space
    to trace and dance in the essence of
    u and shower u in the garden of love
    tonight caressin all pain away
    tonight filling yo heart in gleam
    tonight loving u like a true King
    tonight honoring ya bauty as Queen
    tonight my beloveth i give u me

    so maybe tonight u might accept
    this compassion sweet affection
    deep caressin and great warm comfort
    maybe u will take my heart and soul
    forever hold as i held your inside
    maybe my loveth we can touch minds
    and taste a divine rapture tonight !

    :hearts2: :kiss1: :hearts2:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loves core is deep make you weep
    say things out in the open
    comapssionate bliss of the rare kind
    the down deep something something love thang
    this was on it and feeling the vibe
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweepin cross the heart is love
    thankz Angel u fel it too whewwwwwww!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And if part 1 wasn't wonderful enough to behold, now there is part 2. You continue to whisk your reader away on a cloud of passion. What a lucky lady...wow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz sis for the drop here
    untouched beloveth forth art thou .
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so tonight
    just u and i
    together our
    hearts will
    fly cross the
    great
    unknown
    tonight if u will
    as i set ya soul
    to a thrill of a
    perfect love
    compassionate
    bliss u and i
    together in this
    tonight !!!!!!!
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    whoever she be...
    you fly high with she
    you send great loving her way
    a love passion like shinning rays.ll
    thanks rich
     
  8. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    finally a sequal that holds its own with the original. tight scribe

    Lyr1c
     
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    SoothinDivinity Active Member MEMBER

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    Well, all I can say is that you did it again. Keep makin those hits that express you and thanks for allowing us to experience all that you feel because it's beauty.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deepy big thankz sista for the love & support
    surely love is in the air floating

    tzevi1278.......thankz a million for the love & support as love fly


    soothinDivinity....... love is alwayz divine and sweet thankz a million
    for the supporting love here
     
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