Black Poetry : Tonight I Welcome You in Me (word play)

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  1. blackgirlscry

    blackgirlscry Member MEMBER

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    Let the flow I write
    Seduce your mind
    Let the thoughts you began to feel
    Make you hunger for more of me
    Allow the whispers of my syllables to penatrate yours sense as you enter into my world
    Bittersweet just like the chocolate I am, across your lips as you taste my thoughts
    Allow me to melt into your soul as you desire to know the dominatrix in my flow
    I know you feel me because I can sense your need to be fed
    But I won't devour your hunger, not tonight
    You must wait, like a virgin, you are not ready
    Though I've allowed you to enter me
    I am the master of my words and the predator of your thoughts
    You want more, I know
    I am wanting you to feel all that I am
    but now is not the time
    Just relax close your eyes
    Breath in, breath out
    Breath deep, now release
    It's ok
    Rewind. Reread and Rethink the possibilities that will COMFORT your spirit. Imagine the Seduction that will magnify your inner desire, as you read me.
    Let me take you there inside my panndora box of spoken words
    Tonight I am giving you a taste of imagination
    I release you to imagine
    Me
    Come,
    so I can educate your unknown,
    Allow me to EMBRACE YOUR TRUTH
    Tonight I welcome you to desire my flow
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Breathtaking flow that is!
     
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    blackgirlscry Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much for your kind words
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'yeah!
    as i envision all that u are
    feeding da mental to it's core
    let it flow give me more
    let da poetic show go
    as i drift inside yo space
    unbound in grasp ya play
    yes lay yo chocolate ink
    cross my lip as i taste da lyrics
    and know u now in da mist
    of the poeticmaster
    yes come comfort me
    wit scribes and verses
    as we now start a combination
    word spin to mesmerize
    if not tonight then in our morrow

    This was awesome and devine, love it sister blackgirlscry
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Whoodee-Hoo! Sister, this whole piece was word play to the max! This was mental teasing to the nth degree! (Shame on you!) j/k :)

    Well done. Well said....And those 2 highlighted lines were my favorites!
     
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    blackgirlscry Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the Love. More to come.
     
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