Black Poetry : *Tonight I danced with Love*

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  1. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :love:

    He took me by the hand, and led me to the floor
    Found a nearby spot, jus for us to explore
    He lQQked deep into my brown eyes
    Brutha's gotz me hypnotized
    A very nice shoe size :luv:
    I see my choice was very wise
    Swayin hips gently to the beat
    As we slowly shuffle our feet
    Wondering if he is a freak
    Cause when he speaks
    knees get weak
    got my heart doin a dance on it's own
    poundin, jumpin, and skippin beats :jumping:
    his hair brushes against my cheek
    Wishin we were between the sheets

    Cause I know his fiyah's jus right....

    Jus want to be held in his arms
    I know that He can do it right
    Brutha's got it goin on
    And... back to reality I come
    He pulls me in a lil closer
    Believe me I'll Not run
    Layin my head on his shoulder

    Song jus about to end
    Deep inside I hide the truth
    Secretly lovin him within
    can't wait
    to dance with Love again :love:

    Nita:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now i think somebody
    feeling da heat of dancing love

    this was tyte sis.....flow mo !
     
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    lol da right shoe size....gurl you to much
    dance on this was tight
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    this poem was truly sweet...
    i see how this cat moved you with
    da size of his feet...lol
    sometimes a slo dance
    makes the night complete....

    this was very tight my sis...
    i totally enjoyed it :)
    one love
    khasm
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmmmmmmmm
    Check you out!! :flamet:
     
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    suspose, just suspose he had a wad of toilet tissue in his shoes? I could airmail my :uzi: to you...lol...just joking
    dance all night...and let :love: take over
     
  7. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rofl...

    $$RICH$$ ya know ya right!!
    Mba...you know you knows me!....lol
    khasm...well..let's jus say, he rocked me with more than his feet
    he had my mind feelin sweet...
    kente watch out now...lol
    queen...lol...naw..I know this brutha legit..but thanks sis...lol
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like spike Lee said It has to be the shoes.......LOL
    tight drop sis...LOL ;)
     
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    RE:TO NITA

    STory is steamy
    Quite dreamyThanks
    for the time you took
    to rhyme.
    It always goes good to the ear
    Alpha Male gives you his CHEER!!!



     
  10. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rofl

    Python...I live for your replies...rofl..thanks :luvv:
    Alpha how sweet, thanks for takin the time to listen, much :luvv: back @ ya.
     
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