Quiet Poetry Lounge : Tonight I cried

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Aug 2, 2010.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to write something.
    I want to take all these feelings in my head and heart and put them on paper.
    But I can'tMy heart is so full, it's beating so hard against all these emotions.
    I can't formulate the words to match what seems to want to pour out.
    So I cry.
    Each tear drop is an expression of
    longing
    desire
    frustration
    confusion
    lust
    love
    fear.
    So I sit here as my tears pool and I see
    What I couldn't say.
    So tonight instead of writing to you
    or about you
    I cried over you.
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tonight , i feel you deeply sis..........
     
  3. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent, you've captured an emotion and a situation that no doubt is familiar to many of us. This will hurt for many who read it - that means it is GOOD.

    Thank you for sharing this.

    One,

    - Ikoro
     
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