Black Poetry : Tonight a tribute Friend II

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tonight
    what i wanna say
    can't be expressed
    what i feel can't be
    tested but u should
    know how deep my
    love go !

    I tribute this to u
    from words that
    sometime can't do
    what my heart feel
    listen as i spill da deal

    U mean more to me then
    u know hope u feel it in my
    flow i treasure ya wisdom
    i river ya worth our bond
    shared is real never rehurst
    u been my backbone
    u been my friend
    i stand beside u & always will
    i feel ya pain i know ya hurt
    this something never rehurst
    we shared sorrow's
    we know our struggle
    sometime we cross sometime
    we shine but never have we
    forgot the faith and what all
    have taken place i never knew
    it would be true and what my
    heart feel and say to u
    I never knew it would last
    as the season and tyme has past
    i never knew u care , now i know
    all dis u bare so i can't say what
    i feel but i'll try and so u know da
    real deal how i feel u been too good
    u been so sweet u always know
    and fulfill me wit a treat i can't
    express the moment i feel but i'll
    share da cares wrap u in da warmth
    of tender love caress u in our savior
    kiss ya soul wit gentle embrace
    so u know we together in dis race
    u mean more to me then u know
    so i wanna tell u so u know my heart
    my beat and mind what i feel and how
    we shine like the starz above and the
    history of one love i treasure u in da
    grace ya essence of place
    i respect ya heart ya word ya soul
    ur a gift a true golden locket to me
    so i tribute this to u see
    as i close the page i say forever more
    remember me coz i'm true to u as u to me
    i will forever and ever be , if u need me
    call me please i will answer even if u sneeze
    blink an i i'll run and fly twist u finger
    i'll never leave u to linger swing ya wand
    sing a song i'll always be close to home
    dat's what friends for ..... :deal: :love:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i read n smile
    smiled n read some more
    stop n blushed..was like wow
    true confessions of that one
    held so dear...... :spin:
    this was so sweet... i could feel the love
    from this flow....a true friend....as b4
    i think she treasure you the same... :love:


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If that doesn't spell friendship, then I don't know what does. This was very endearing. I'm sure your friend must know, and feel blessed for having you as a friend.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Angel yes i confess and hope it's heard
    coz i needed to say it and let it be known that
    i have a true friend and what friendship is about !

    thankz watz i sho hope so and know my heart is with them alwayz
    hope one know we like two peas in a pot .
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this so much sent to a friend a true friend
    u know who u are !
     
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    i agree with watsinaname....




    beautifull this is...



    this is friendship in tha purest form...:sand:



    now who does not want a friend like that...
    or to be like that to someone....




    i know whoever he or she is...


    this person will be blushing,smiling,jumping



    rich this is a beautifull piece......



    for manny of us.. :wave:







    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    A beautiful mind!
     
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    wow...this was so heartfelt
    this peace "glowed" with
    sincerity....

    there is no way...she wouldn't feel this...

    ^5 Rich...this was an awesome flow
     
  9. $$RICH$$

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    so true libertylady............indeed this friend means so much to me
    trust me i'll forever be dat same friend can always call on or lean on
    thankz u so much sistah.

    sho ya right 1poet.........a true friend in need is a true friend indeed
    thankz brutha for the shout out !

    yes yes yes Angelicsage ......ur right i laid my heart out so one know
    my feelings is real and i care and value our friendship thank u so much
    sistah by the way have i told u lately i wuv u !
     
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    Dap'z On the Flow my brother! :bomb:
     
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