Black Poetry : Tomorrow in Your Eyes, a $$RICH$$ and Watz Collaboration

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Watz"
    Tomorrow isn't promised to anyone
    no matter what we say or do.
    But when I look into your eyes
    I see tomorrow in you.
    I've read tomorrow
    in the words you write.
    Each letter symbolizes a
    prophecy of carefree flight.
    I sense tomorrow
    in the aura you send.
    Like a welcoming letter
    from a long lost friend.
    I taste tomorrow
    in that succulent kiss.
    That ever lingering flavor
    of a cascading bliss.
    I feel tomorrow
    as our bodies melt into one
    in a spectrum of ecstasy
    as radiant as the sun.
    Tomorrow is the answer
    to a dream untold.
    Let me look into those eyes,
    and let the future unfold.

    $$RICH$$
    and tomorrow was like ever more
    as u pose the lasting instor
    as i embrace ya flow it tells me
    tomorrow's glo of radiant essence
    a beauty to mesmerize deep inside
    da walls of ya eyez
    it linger a letter so worth
    and the warm tender verse
    lyrical musical string silent tones
    hearts bring let me live inside da
    vision and hold it dear
    with compassion without any fears
    ya words drip like da rainbow of
    colors and hoover like a blanket
    to asure tomorrow is promised
    from today's magic in every lastin
    kiss the taste lingers in flava
    and every moment shared takes
    us into tomorrow's foundation of
    cares as u allow me to look into
    ya walls of eyes and let the reasons
    see of a beings so divine in tomorrow
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh this is so nice:)
    loving this collab
    flowing indeed :)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankyou Blue for the props on this piece.

    Rich,
    My mind's third eye
    sees what the future may behold.
    A vision of you I see
    in a season yet to unfold
    It's springtime now
    and lovers kiss
    and share in passionate bliss.
    I think of you and know not
    the reason that I foresee
    the things I do.
    It's simply that part of me
    that I keep hidden from view.
    So secretly embrace me within
    your soul, caress me in your mind.
    Today's dream will begin
    when we reach out and find....
    Tomorrow
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like heaven and earth
    the warmth of spring
    is in the motion of
    tomorrow as today
    flash of flooded vision
    takes us into a season
    inside ya eyez the sparkle
    of a star gleam bright
    lighting way for tomorrow
    as we walk the lane
    whispers round out the voice
    in our blooming hush for
    tomorrow a new day
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A new day in you
    as the vision explodes
    into a rainbow of beauty
    and humble abodes
    hang your hat
    stay awhile
    in this comfortable view
    I'm diggin your style
    you're feeling my vibe
    Let me caress the deep
    motion in the ocean
    of your flow as you seep
    fathom by fathom
    until you reach
    the heart of all that matters
    I will learn, will you teach
    me? Or am I already a muse,
    as you are mine.
    Let us entwine our thoughts
    and become one idea....
    Tomorrow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's an delightful
    ray of sunshine
    inside da divine
    moment as da day
    passing into the new
    tomorrow
    the radiant glo is
    beautiful and warm
    tomorrow awaits from
    today like a journey
    in tyme a zone a place
    to relax in wit vision...
     
  7. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep it going Mighty Men of the Pen!!!! I'm really diggin this one. Be blessed.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
  8. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    train coming

    this is nice flows like water keep it goin.....
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad to know you're digging this Earthly Allure. I guess my name seems neutral to some, I am a she.
    Sensualreality, thank you for enjoying the smoothness of the flow.

    Thank you Rich, flowing with you is always an honor.
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

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    nice flow enjoyed it...wow
    indeed
    Peace angel
     
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