Black Poetry : 'tom-tom'

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 26, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~for the 1 who shall always be 'there'~


    your love beats
    like
    conga
    rhythms

    palms
    gently slapping
    two-fingers
    lightly tapping,

    moving, stretching
    the
    taut skin of
    my
    thighs

    yes
    yes!

    pour the
    beat into my
    mind

    strum the
    strings of my
    soul

    stir the fires
    in my
    heart

    be the rhythm
    of my life

    play my song
    sing my song

    deep~touch~feel

    your
    tom-tom


    alyce 2001
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I evidently need to practice this beat so my fingers can smile. I likes this piece queen. keep doin' what you do.

    one love,blak
     
  3. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    i hear the drum!!!!!!!!

    shaboom boom clack! heart pounds and splendor!

    nice piece

    jah
     
  4. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sensational

    images here...ms.a! diggin the way you bein' da 'drum-drum'!!

    :wink:

    (he MUSS be beatin it ryght!)

    mojo
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can't even respond right (write)

    no.
    really...
    when is the book coming out?
    -7
     
  6. raheem

    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your

    willingness
    to offer yourself
    your supple skin
    upon his drum
    shows more than
    trust
    and so we cum
    to learn of
    love beats

    1~2~1

    and hope life
    one day
    brings us
    some


    r

    forever bowed to your greatness
     
  7. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is So sweet

    I really like this... Keep playing those drums!!!
     
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    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEY NOW!

    this was a sweet piece---

    diggin it all 'round
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite nyce, dear poetess. lovin' this piece!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ALYCE

    IN THE TOM~TOM BEAT OF DRUMS HE THE
    ONE OF LOVE IN U IS THE SOUND OF
    FOREVER AND A DAY
    GURL U BE ON POINT IN VIBE
    DES BE OFF THE CHAIN....SAY IT SIS.
     
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