Black Poetry : Toilli

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Oct 26, 2004.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I admire your intelligence
    You’re living evidence
    There is a God because you’re heaven sent
    You’re ambitious and sophisticated
    Everyday I’m elated
    Because I get to wake up every morning knowing you were created
    For me
    You were like the missing piece to my puzzle
    Every night I fall asleep to your sweet and subtle
    Voice, while trying to keep my poise
    Maybe that’s the reason why it’s a struggle
    To keep you off the other end of my phone
    I used to always leave you, but now I can’t leave you alone
    Because there’s something about your innocence
    That holds my interest
    Because you’re different
    From your name right down to your ambitions
    We’re growing and making transitions
    Into something beautiful
    Taking what we know and what we’re learning to make it useful
    Nothing feels better than connecting when we connect
    Knowing I have a lady with goals and an incredible intellect
    When I don’t think Ill see the day after tomorrow
    I call you; your voice leads me to bliss and I follow
    For years my heart has been empty ‘til hollow
    But you’re filling it ‘til full
    And for some reason you’re stable enough to tame this bull
    Because even in heated situations you always keep your cool
    I’ve written many rhymes
    Crushed a girl a million times
    But I swear to goodness I’m
    What I’m feeling is unfathomable
    Intangible
    I know my wall is tall and hard to knock down
    Pigs would fly and hell would freeze if someone else held your spot down
    You’ve got the key to my lockdown
    And I know I have the key to yours
    One day Ill open up and give you tours
    Of my soul, my heart, and my mind
    But right now, I just need time
    I’m
    Everything I promised myself I wouldn’t be
    Head over heels.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooweeeeeee!
    nuffin wrong wit falling deep
    as long as u know and speak
    head ova heels is good too
    coz u not lost in da valley of truth
    tyte scribe i love how this mentally played out to me
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww, honey - this is gorgeous. (I'm so glad you got somebody special!) :spinstar:

    I'm completely vibin on this part:

    One day Ill open up and give you tours
    Of my soul, my heart, and my mind
    But right now, I just need time
    I’m
    Everything I promised myself I wouldn’t be
    Head over heels


    Dang, that's deep. Your poetry has grown so much along with you.

    I've missed your flows, and I'm lovin this one. Keep followin your heart.


    PS - good luck in the scrimmage tomorrow night. :bball: I'll be thinkin of you. :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The piece to your puzzle huh, well go on then, and I really liked that line btw. In fact, I enjoyed the entire flow....
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall

    and gempis, i didnt get to play because of my leg. but thanks tho.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww, I'm sorry, sweetie. Hope it gets better soon. You're in my prayers everyday and as always, I am sendin you lots of love.......
     
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    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very beautiful and emotive :sand: ....