Black Haiku : Toilet Paper Love (Haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Sep 27, 2001.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Toilet paper love...
    Pooped and peeped on frequently.
    No more rolls for me.







    From the "I Haiku You" series

    Copyright 2001 © by Joyce Rogers
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and

    I sit on one place
    with no wipe
    can't ya gotcha!

    flow on sis...............:D
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Rich

    This is one of my lighter Haikus. Thanks for your humorous reflection.
     
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    this was too cute and funny. just what i needed this morning. i see i'm not the only one who experiences the lack of t-paper when its most needed.

    zhay
     
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    Joyce,

    I received 2 views from this, funny and sad. I wonder if anyone else did? I love reading the Haiku Queen.:heart:

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You Read Right Coco

    Funny and SAD!!! I wrote this in hopes that the person who finds themselves in this situation will gather the strength to stop being pooped and peeped on when it comes to love.

    Glad you like the Haiku.
     
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    Joyce

    sometime love don't see at all
    just sit there wit no whipes
     
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    Dayuummmmmm.... u know I had to read this one out loud to my womenfriends;) !!

    this schitt should be printed on T-shirts...

    let the caption read..."TOILET PAPER LOVE..NO MORE ROLLS FOR ME!!"

    I LOVED THIS ONE J....

    *tight-panties*
     
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    Joyce......

    Even with a kind and giving heart You just have
    to know when enough is enough
    this was a good one, I liked the metaphor....I can visualize it,
    cause thats how you really feel, be it love or friendship....well done.


    epiphany :heart:
     
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    haiku queen,

    as always- tyte.
     
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