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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    • you and i
    • making love
    • beyond da night skies
    • where starz gleam
    • soul float on dreams
    • we as a team
    • hearts
    • cascading deep
    • awaken love
    • from it's sleep
    • caressin thoughts
    • of tomorrow
    • you and i
    • together
    • of life's treasure
    • wit all due pleasure
    • size yet not measured
    • callin your name
    • you call me
    • together as a we
    • finding warmth
    • to cuddle in
    • we now lovers
    • above friendz
    • tasting ya essence
    • u lick on my charm
    • our bodies clash
    • our love is #1
    • beyond existance
    • above da maze
    • together we crave
    • in da beauty
    • of love instilled
    • upon da heart
    • pur souls fly
    • together

    :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1:
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow $Rich$. I like that line, u lick on my charm. A little mind twisting as well as poetic!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Together
    mutually fulfilling a craving
    a yen, a flavor, a taste
    we've both been saving
    for that special one
    arousing each other
    from sleep, as the warmth bonds
    us securely to one another
    through our waking hours as well
    caught under this blissful spell
    Together

    Quite a creative and touching vibe Rich. I loved the way you laid this out.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz wisdom7 i do have a way in the twist affect

    thinkz watz it was one off my head today like free styling
     
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    Yeah, you got it together RICH, so well put together.
     
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    1poet it was one that shot out my head off the top
    thankz a million because togetherness is awareness .
     
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    Another classic write from u, Rich!
     
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    big thankz brutha bigdrizzle your words means a lot.
     
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    re:Together

    Very beautiful poem of bonding whole and complete.
     
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    two make an whole mending da soul with da heart
    thankz a million poetrymama
     
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