Black Poetry : Together

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by renee31127, Sep 18, 2003.

  1. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the future I see you and I forever
    And I know that if we try we can endeavor
    Through the rest of our lives together
    Your love is a real to me as the blood racing through my veins
    It’s like my life force and I don’t know if I can survive without it
    Did you think that you and I was gonna be easy
    This aint no made-for-TV-movie
    We have to work on this
    You knew I came with baggage and I knew you had some too
    But it’s about time we both unpacked
    Cause what you give me I don’t wanna put away in some bag
    I want to wear it on my sleeve
    Shout it from the rooftops
    But mostly I wanna feel it inside me
    You keep everything bottled up, until it explodes out
    Why can’t you let me in
    Let me help you
    Let me stand beside you
    Let me hold your hand
    You think these demons that haunt you nightly
    Eating at you don’t effect me
    Well they do
    Brick by brick you just keep adding to this wall you’ve built around yourself
    So how I should expect that I can break it down all by myself
    All these years you were just standing behind it
    Even now you won’t come out
    And I really don’t know how I’m supposed to help you
    You’re too stubborn, and with too much pride, too many guards put up
    With more issues than PEOPLE Magazine
    But I’ve already signed up for a lifetime subscription
    I can say I love you and I hate you all in the same breath
    And when it comes down to it
    I always seem to be left with the same thing
    That it doesn’t really matter what I’m saying, as long as you’re in it
    They probably think I’ve lost my mind
    To willingly put myself in this thing that may be the most dysfunctional relationship I’ve ever known
    But I don’t really care what they think
    Cause I know I’m going insane
    Feeling like Beyonce, all “Crazy In Love”
    Sitting around waiting for the men to come
    To take me away in one of those white jackets
    And throw me in a padded room, and still I’ll be thinking of only you
    You’re the reason for my madness
    The straw that broke the camel’s back
    Sent me from slightly indifferent
    Mildly irrational
    Maybe even a little delusional
    To completely insane in just one kiss
    But I really should complain
    Cause I wouldn’t have it any other way
    So know that I’ll always be there when you wanna let me in
    I’ll always be there to help you
    Always there to stand beside you
    Always there to hold your hand
    Cause I know you’d do the same for me
    And there’s no other way we can get through this
    Except together
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    renee, where u been girl? welcome back! this is tight.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love this flow ya pen is awesome
    u been missed happy to be reading u again !
     
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    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply amazing!!!!
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this flow...i'm feeling this same exact way about someone...you read my mind.
     
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    i like this
    the flow was nice...
     
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    lovin' this.
     
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