Black Haiku : Togetha

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  1. divine_1

    divine_1 Active Member MEMBER

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    i came here alone
    but somewhere along the line
    we have become one

    mind stimulating
    discussions shared...i feel free
    happiness, at peace

    and when u hold me
    i'm safe, secure truth be my
    life just seems complete

    but i can't allow
    myself to be blinded u
    might still hurt my heart
     
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    i like this :spin:
     
  3. divine_1

    divine_1 Active Member MEMBER

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    mzblkangel

    Asante, Shukran, Gracias, Thank you ~in 4 languages~ thank u for the love shown in response to all my writez that i have shared with the destee fam.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful lovin
    of two that was one within
    to make it whole now
     
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    i can def relate to this. really really pretty.
     
  6. divine_1

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    Writin in purple 4 peace, creativity & Spirituality,
    Rich and Gempis.... thankz 4 the love always shown
    neva hesatate to show support/love/concern since day 1,
    that's why i'm happy u'r fam. 1 Love ~divine
     
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    This was a nice poem. Very strong emotions.
     
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    most welcome within
    da heart of thee unto u
    forth poeticly
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    well done devine_1
    17 syllables and essence...
    and in 3 (essentially individual haikus) verses
    well done...when i finished it all i could say (and aloud) was nice, nice...
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    forgive me..divine_l i spelled your name wrong above...and i apologize....