Black Poetry : Todays Scene

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UL820, Oct 11, 2001.

  1. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Old rooms filled
    with Mahogany
    Its brown brushed
    by red-rosed blush
    Shining brightly
    showing SHE
    truly loves the
    New House
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    I really liked this! Your descriptive language is so vivid! I can just picture an old, refurnished home with Mahogany and Cherry wood throughout it from floors to stairs and beautiful banisters, everything just gleaming!

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    Great piece! And what a lovely home!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a picture perfect view to the new space
     
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