Black Poetry : Today's Promise of Tommorrow

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maybe Tommorrow he’ll call
    I hope tommorrow I won’t care
    Maybe tommorrow he’ll love me
    I hope tommorrow I know longer need him to
    Cause yesterday he promised
    That tommorrow would be better
    I cry sometimes after he leaves my bed
    Cause I know that tommorrrow for us
    Will always be what today is
    I know what “We” are
    I know that there has never been an “Us”
    Only an “Us” that I pretend it to be
    A quick hello a long goodbye
    What is this obsession I have
    For his heart
    The need I feel for his body
    The constant thoughts
    Of yesterdays
    And what I could have done
    To make it a tommorrow I hope for
    Everytime I look into his eyes
    I see only lust
    Everytime he lays beside me
    I feel only the heat of his passion
    I don’t see Love
    I don’t feel cherished
    One day my tommorrow will come
    And I will look back on my yesterdays
    With a fond thought.
    Because today I can’t seem to let go
    But For now I can live with
    The Promise of Tommorrow
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha,

    Very kewl and passionate read!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    adefinitediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha,
    my soul sista . . . you've done it again.
    You read me this time. These thoughts
    you have well-versed are a representation
    of my present status. It seems like you
    know me and you are telling my story.
    Continue to do what you do!
     
  4. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the read GQ ! :D

    adefinitediva : Girl I find comfort knowing that I am not alone when it comes to the many trials and tribulations when it comes to my dealings with men !!!!!

    When its good its VERY good ! but when that good turns sad ....watch out now ! :x:

    Thanks for the support friends
     
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