Black Poetry : Today...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ILL, Apr 30, 2006.

  1. ILL

    ILL Active Member MEMBER

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    Today while,
    looking into your eyes
    I pushed all my misgivings to the side and
    tore down these walls now i'm
    open and exposed
    no more time spent hiding
    and while looking into your eyes
    my world was opened up
    and you may call me crazy but i've yet to
    feel this mans touch to
    feel his brown skin aganist mine
    teasingly tantilizing my senses
    til' i'm begging him to come inside
    leaving semen traces
    our kids,
    I can see their faces
    they will have your eyes
    and my smile
    but we can talk about that in awhile
    cuz right now
    I just want to ride this ride and
    never come off this emotional high
    you reached deep inside
    removing scar tissue
    and past emotional misuse
    and found parts of me I thought had died
    today while,
    looking into your eyes
    I shared with you my one last cry
    as I took insecurities pictures down off the walls
    swept up all my soul ties and walked
    fear to the door and said good-bye
    you knew me when I thought I knew myself
    saw more then a pretty face
    you looked through me and saw my inner wealth
    honoring me as if we stood before God and
    promised each other forever through sickness and health
    today I,
    stood still in your presence
    serene,
    absorbing your scent
    inhaling loves incense
    and while looking into your eyes this time
    which felt like the first time....

    I exhaled.
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this was some write poet do flo on poet.:welldone:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Ill,
    Welcome to our home, which is your's too...enjoy your stay and jump on the wagan..happy to have you with us :great:
    "Waiting to exhale" ...And need less to say, you were carrying around a lot of unwanted/needed installation...^5 to you for the breath of fresh air you took in. Nice piece poet, it had a warm and wonderful flo to it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this flow some love

    Tyte poetic drop ,butta smooth too happy you here to share
    and help spread the poetic love within , welcome ILL
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HECK NAW I WAS FEELIN DIS FLO
    SHOOT MADE ME EXHALE...LOL
    NICE DROP
    SO FLO ON WIT NONSTOP


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And who wouldn't exhale after experiencing this kind of feeling? Seems like someone found the combination to your heart, simply beautiful.
     
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