Black Poetry : Today

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rashad, Jan 13, 2005.

  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I picked up a pen and wished I could write
    my soul away to place of no worries or pain
    as Lenny would say about his girl "she makes me feel good"
    her name is poetry and she flows with me
    has me feelin right like a toke of the trees that grow
    from the earth and she as the sun is the one that helps it grow
    twofold now blow...
    Trying to make it from the bottom to the top is a steep
    drop if not surefooted in an unsure world
    so let me take some time to etch my name across the
    sky of empty pages and let my soul glow as the
    message on the wall in code you c a n decipher
    the soulful sounds of floetry helping to make the poetry
    I see that eases the mind and relaxes the soul as
    Creativity abounds w/blessings even when it seems
    everything has gone wrong, but my will is strong
    enough to know the storm will pass if you can just
    hold on...
    as I picked up a pen and wished I could
    write my soul away to a place
    to be continued...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wit pen in hand sign ya name
    let da floetry of poetry flow
    feeling u more then u know
    scribe poet nice to be reading you again
    and hey
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY Rashad.
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice one.... its amazin what some can do wit a pen... keep on pickin it up... and happy bday- if u aint hear it enuf.
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey poets,
    preciate the love. Just tryn to bless some space today ya know.
     
  5. SoothinDivinity

    SoothinDivinity Active Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful

    That was so beautiful. Happy Birthday also. You are really gifted and I loved what you wrote.
     
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    I too have felt this way.....deeply feeling your scribe......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a wonderful ode to poetry. You flow was as smooth as silk. I enjoyed this, and, happy birthday!!!!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "TODAY" flows like magic!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drop dead gorgeous, that's what this flow is. Props for this...........
     
  10. PositiveMindset

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    No need 2 wish, it's always possible with pen & pad.

    Tight.
     
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