Quiet Poetry Lounge : TODAY....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CreativeExpress, Mar 4, 2004.

  1. CreativeExpress

    CreativeExpress Active Member MEMBER

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    Today you starred in my heart
    and stayed in my mind
    Today I saw your shadow
    when I closed my eyes
    Today you etched your soul
    in the palm of my hand
    Today I was your woman
    and you were my man
    Today I was asleep
    and I had a dream
    That you were deep inside me
    and I couldn't control my cream...
    Today you were unattainable
    Tomorrow you'll be unmistakable
    Today I was unbreakable
    Tommorrow I'll be shakeable
    Today he burned a hole
    and seared my sensitivity
    Tommorrow you'll cure it
    because our bond is destiny
    Today I was your friend
    Tommorrow I'm your lover
    The next day I will have you
    Like I have had no other
    Today....
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Creative Express...

    You are quickly becoming a "Favorite"...

    Please continue to "wow" me...

    Enjoying the reads!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done lovin ya scribing
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, you drew me in with this, from first line to the last, keep flowing this was wonderful.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Even better the second time around....

    Where are you poet...we need more of this... :spinstar:

    Encore!
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was divine. I loved it and could relate to it as if I wrote it myself.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this move me i love it
     
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