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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Jun 6, 2001.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i float in calm waters
    right off the coast of
    my private beach
    clouds sprinkled across the sky
    the bright sun's reflection
    dances on wave peaks
    and i drift weightlessly
    on the tide

    as the breeze redirects its course
    i swim to shore before
    the tide beneath threatens
    to carry me out to sea
    the warm black sand welcomes me
    i stretch my body
    and lay down to bathe in the sun
    it coats my skin with a darker hue
    it blesses my eyes with rest
    and still i float
    in weightlessness

    breathe...
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poet you know i love it when you write of things of beauty.
    It is you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tooooo sweeeet

    so much beauty as u blossom an bloom :heart: :kiss:
     
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    BREATHTAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL!

    Loved this piece and all that it entailed.
    It has a melancholy sweetness to it!
    I like ya style , keep scribin!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i still remember the blossoming flower
     
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