Black Poetry : today

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Jun 6, 2001.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i float in calm waters
    right off the coast of
    a private beach
    clouds sprinkled across the sky
    the bright sun's reflection
    dances on wave peaks
    and i drift weightlessly
    on the tide

    as the breeze redirects its course
    i swim to shore before
    the tide beneath threatens
    to carry me out to sea
    the warm black sand welcomes me
    i stretch my body
    and lay down to bathe in the sun
    it coats my skin with a darker hue
    it blesses my eyes with rest
    and still i float
    in weightlessness

    breathe...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhhhhhhhh!! yes
    i love the way u painted des
    i'm floating on air now...
    beautifully done;)
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista - please tell me where the heck this beach is...:lol:
    **** - I wanna go
    so that I can relax
    just like this
    peace says!

    Lovin' it ma!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...in the sea air I did
    as I saw you...
    ..there floating among the
    balsa wood and shimmers
    that dotted the waters
    you.....look so serene
    tranquil thoughts run through
    my mind....so I think......
    I wonder if she sees me?
    No she doesn't
    because I'm looking through\
    the window of my mind
    and I see her / backstroking
    on the surface of waters
    at her private beach that
    she described to me......but
    where I could not be......yet
    ...she...is beautiful


    this piece was tight queen. keep hittin' me with 'em

    one love,blak
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love $RICH$...
    N2, just close yo eyes, girl...
    and when you flow from me blakverb
    i just melt...
    thank you.
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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