Black Poetry : Today ( I Rain On You)

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  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Orchestrator of words
    yes
    The cab driver of life
    Hallowed and swallowed in pride
    Hallowed and swallowed in side
    Caught conspicusously caught
    Rotating in the steering wheel
    of
    false perceptions
    and
    unhealthy intentions

    Quickly I begin to aspire
    Leaking through the very roof
    you call your brain
    purposely to get you wet
    calling my showers near

    Today I Rain On You
    promis to never place pain on you
    promise to never be a shamed of you

    Inscriptions of life
    seen through these
    the very eyes of MISTA

    Its sunshine
    Shimmering
    Showing
    sunshine
    Sophisticated
    sunshine
    Shaded
    sunshine
    sound
    sunshine

    I
    Introduce you to this balanced sunshine
    I have been wating here
    Just for you
    I have been waiting
    for this very moment

    This moment of laughter
    This moment of you
    This very moment of un wanted rapture

    Today I Rain On You
    Place pain on you
    Promise to never be ashamed of you

    Scattering myself into seclusion
    Not wanting to be secular or submissive
    I secrete these
    These tears
    Violent tears
    These temporary tears
    Refreshing tears
    Tears of decit
    These very tears of pain

    Sad to say it
    Its misery in this
    Fear trapped in this
    But most importantly
    Its love in this

    This being

    The moment of inperfect time
    Mind being transported to the right place
    Eyes focused on these
    Written but spoken words
    These underlined words
    These words of courage
    These words of hope
    These very words of happiness
    These unwanted words of rapture

    Today I Rain On You
    Place love on you

    Hold on tight im still close to you
    So i place change on you
    Today like no other
    We exchange tears
    For this very moment we call life
    I extend my self beyond everthing
    Just so you can hear something with substance

    My hands carry my worries
    My fears
    My loyalty
    My responsibility
    My strength
    My wisdom

    Must
    I
    State
    True
    Answers

    These uplifting answers
    These answers for change
    These answers for my questions
    These answers for your questions
    These very answers for the world

    You stand still here in trans
    These are my personal answers for life

    Today I rain On You
    Placed love in you

    Today You Are
    A part of
    MISTA
     
  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW!!!

    !!WoW!!
    This scribe was so beautiful.
    Words just can't do this piece justice so....
    :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:
    :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:
    :heart::heart::heart::heart:
    :heart::heart::heart:
    :heart:

     
  3. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am speechless.
    This is beautiful.
    I love it.
    Smooches!!! :wave:
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You certainly have a way with words, go ahead, let it pour, we'll keep on reading....
     
  5. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You definitely comes with it my brother
    I love your imagery!
    Your writing is so vivid
    This poem is a good example of that
    Keep flowing!!!!!!!!!!


    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    simply too sweet dis da kind of motion to lay in
    ya off da heezy indeed u mastered this well
     
  7. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU

    TWISION MYBRO RICH MY SISTAS NITA AND MISS BLK WATZ THATGIRL
    YALL KEEP INSPIRING ME WITH CONSTANT WORDS
    WORDS OF LOVE WORDS OF RESPECT IM TAKING A BREAK TO READ NOW BUT I WILL RETURN AND IM LOOKING FOR YALL TO SPEAK TO ME AND I KNOW I ALWAYS SAY THIS BUT CAN I PLEASE GET A COLLAB
     
  8. Earthly Allure

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    This was simply...liberating. You are truly blessed. Antyime you want to do a collab, get at me; i'm looking to do one as well. Be blessed
     
  9. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANk you

    thank you for everything this piece was written for me
    i needed the rain more than anyone so i rained
     
  10. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THROW BACK MONDAYS FOR ME
    I DO THIS TO KEEP FROM GOING CRAZY
     
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