Black Poetry : Today I hope

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Sep 4, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Today I fly
    Soaring above the pain and sorrow
    My soul revels in its freedom

    Today I am happy
    Happier then I was yesterday
    No happier than I can hope to be tomorrow

    Today there is no sorrow
    To hide the joy in my heart
    No overcast of sorrow
    To cause my sprit man to weep

    For tommorrow is never promised
    So I live today
    Like I will live no other

    So

    Today I love you
    Like I've loved no other
    Hoping against hope
    That today ………you can love me too

    Natasha
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha

    I loves ya gurl. Like the flow. Always love yosef even if nobody else will.




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  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nat, very nicely written, gurl. thank you for this piece. keep on scribin'...it's tyght!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now

    as i loved u yesterday in gleam
    i love u today all the same wit no
    shame coz tomorrow's not mines
    so yes i love u dearly and i love written wordz
    of emotions displayed...............say queen
    :kiss: :kiss:
     
  5. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A beautiful and insightful flow. Leaves one with a light yet deep feeling of hope, to the very edge.
     
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