Black Poetry : Today, I found "you" too...(ans. to "Today, I found "Me" (by: Bigdrizzle)

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Today, I found "you" too

    When you found "you"...I found you too
    I've waited and dreamed, for a sweet thang like you

    It's I, who want to cause, the smile on your face
    I want to feel assured, it can't be re-placed

    We haven't met, yet my love runs deep
    and in your :heart: ...it's me you seek

    Your past love, left you, down without mend
    but I'll erase all your pain, if you just let me in

    I'll not only erase, all the pain that she left...
    but I'll give you the "Intimacy", you'll never forget

    Don't look for no part of "Her ...in Me"
    my only intent, is to set your heart free

    Free to know, I am your Queen...
    and I only want to make you my King

    I want to be, your reason to live
    and never feel, afriad to give

    All the love, you never got
    you see Mr. Biggs...I love you a lot

    ~but I'm not her~

    I'm the one, who will never hurt you
    and I promise you that...I will never desert you

    And when you really, really find You ...
    find Me
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bigdrizzle, this piece was so tight, I found it a pleasure to spin-off from it. Awesome piece poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte spin off too..................
     
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    I got the chance to read his and I must say yous is a nice response to a well heard call.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice answer to Today I Found "Me" queent. Always good to read something from you.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight... i really enjoyed reading this spin off it fits so well
     
  7. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen...It was YOU that forced my hand and made me come outta "retirement" to scribe my last piece. Also, I am so honored and flattered that YOU would even feel compelled to respond and to build on it. Thank you Sista Queen for all of ya kindness and seeing a part of "me" when sometimes I am in doubt of myself.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now queen you know i love your work, this was beautiful as always :heart:
     
  9. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bringing this one back jes becuz.....Thanx again, Queentswana!
     
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