Black Poetry : To you...............

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't take it anymore..... I love you too much to give up what we had just because mistakes was made. I want to be with you no matter the consequences that we bring to the relationship....I am getting tired of always wondering, whose with you all the time.. Are they listening to you and your inner heart? Probably so, probably not.... If not... you deserve better than that... I know I told you that alot but it's the truth.... You deserve to be treated like royality because you are a queen in my eye... You mean alot to me.... I will do anything in my power for you, if it's in my grasp... it's all yours.... Even if I can't have you back in my life as my girl, it's okay because I know that you will always be in my heart... Dayum... I just miss those nights, those short *** nights, of when we conversed about everything and anything.
    ... about our dreams and goals... Those was nights.... Dayum... I just miss you...... Your silly *** laugh..... Your sarcastic remarks... Dayum...... I won't ever regret meeting you.... you taught me so much about life, love, and not to forget basketball.... (Basketball is very interesting too....lol) Anywho...... I just wanted you to know that I still think about you....and the possiblity of us..... There is nothing wrong with dreaming.......
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing whatsoever wrong with your beautiful dream, thanks for sharng.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    right on the point
    aint nothing wrong with dreaming
    flow on .. let it :rolling:
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dreams as see fit
    ain't nothing wrong wit it
    love this one
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoy the read..
    nothing wrong with your dream
    dreams are wishes
    we make reality...
    keep dream...
    love this
     
  6. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you guys for da love and support..
     
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    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was soooo deep, and soooo personal........Thanks for sharing your passion with us...........Nuff Respect!!!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...I was so engaged in the dream :)
     
  9. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys....