Black Poetry : To You, Life....

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life,
    What's up? Nothing too much here but trippin hard once again.
    Okay, okay... let's get to the point..... What the h*ll are you doing to me? You once again tried to take my life because I guess you felt I deserve this...But I was told I am a queen and don't deserve any bad stuff that happens to me...Well that's what I was told...... That car came out of no where..... It hit the my side(the passenger side) which at the moment, I chose not to drive and Boom!!!!! I was rushed to the emergency room and luckily...... enough people cared about me to help me get through this...... Life.... you are such an a**hole.... You knew that I finally asked for true love and yet..... you felt it, NO.... better yet... despise that thought and tried your hardest to end my career and my happiness..... Life....you are full of crap and I wish.... No... you know what... I don't wish anything because then I am letting you get the best of me.... I am letting you control this, this situation.... and no, h*ll no..... you aren't winning this one... Life... you know the saying.... 'What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger'.. Life.... you made me stronger...... Thanks......
    The #1 survivor.............
    A woman
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this flow came to life inside my mental thoughts
    very nice
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Only the strong survive, Go Girl!
     
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    wonderful flow
    yes indeed
    Peace
     
  5. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys.....
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so deep
    yr words have really touched me.
     
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    "The one who owns life"

    Nice to meet you!

    Tyte flow,
    Angelic
     
  8. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you......

    And nice to meet you too......
     
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