Black Poetry : To Whom it may concern.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by YeshuJah, Mar 21, 2001.

  1. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's a thin line
    between love and hate
    the small and the great
    being early or late;
    between doubt & faith;
    between a nine and an eight,
    a stroll and a date.
    If you're patient
    then wait,
    only JAH knows your fate
    and holds the keys
    to heaven's gate.
    You be the fish
    I'll be the bait!
    You're either crooked
    or you're straight,
    within these walls I now vibrate
    on things you might
    not contemplate.
    This is the real,
    some call me great!
    No need to twist or else debate,
    just pour a drink,let's celebrate,
    and let these lyrics penetrate.
    If you can't feel me
    don't relate.
    Still..
    I didn't come to educate,
    so don't berate,nor desecrate.
    If you ain't getting none
    just masturbate,
    and if you can't wait
    don't hesitate.
    It's either you're hungry
    or else you done ate,
    whatever your appetite is
    I will fix your plate.
    This here's worser than trigonometry,
    ain't no way you could calculate;
    the direction I may take,
    'cause without a mind compass
    you couldn't navigate!
    You'd be searching with your
    eyes wide open
    yet you could not cogitate
    how this bard facilitates,
    lyrics so sharp
    they could castrate,
    yet good enough to-
    elevate,
    &
    coronate
    the real lingua franca.
    End of debate!!!
    (c) YeshuJah
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    WOW !!! Luv'n yo' flow !!!

    :jumping:

    do yo' thang ... rite here!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the words of Hip Hop heads...This was doooooooooooooooooooooooooooope! This scribe will initiate all to cogitate more on what they demonstrate as poetry...cause this piece lays it down like Dupont stain coated carpet.

    "10"
     
  4. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow on

    Nice rhythm and rhyme scheme--Amun-Ra
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    NOW DES BE WHAT $RICH$ TALKING BOUT
    TYGHT FLOW
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yesujah...

    welcome... my perfectly poetic brotha!

    this was oh-so tyght!!
    keep doin' what you do...

    PeaceInAllThings...
    Sunshyne~
     
  7. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks all

    Destee,
    thank you for the very warm welcome. This is the first time I’ve ever received such a big hello at a forum. Usually, they’re all glad to see me go. Nice house you gots here. A brother could really get to like this place. Love.

    Blackverb,
    ‘Dupont stain coated carpet?’ Thanks for the big up… jusy dropping a little something, something.


    Amun.
    Thank you for coming in on this.


    Rich. Word up. Just tryna hold it down.


    GA, my beautiful sister.. Love always.

    Thanks all for reading and commenting.
     
  8. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight flow bro i like that great job
     
  9. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    honeyluv, thanks for coming in on this. I appreciate that.

    JAH Lives!
     
  10. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you speak my language

    yea Jah you hit in on the head again
    like your work here
     
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