Black Poetry : TO: Whom It May Concern

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm not lonely, but I feel
    all alone
    Making wishes in a water well
    that's gone...dry
    and suddenly I've figured
    out that you - never
    had me on your mind entirely
    All I wanted
    was to show you that
    unconditional + love = ME
    but you ignored
    that and continued
    to deprive me
    of the simplistic
    things that I ask of you
    so I take this to mean
    you are just not
    quite ready
    ...to experience the joys of
    exclusivity...
    and so I'll sign off
    bringing this hurt to
    an end
    In closing,
    I want you to know
    that you are thought
    of in the highest regards
    even though 'we' were
    unable to make things
    right, my once lover and
    best friend....

    Respectfully ~


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you, ma sista, has done it again...a true masterpiece. keep on scribin', gurl. i'm lovin' it.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2....

    1 word...

    "OVERstood...

    (gyrl!... i can relate fully. this one has caused me to
    scribe... we are poetically in sync at this very moment)

    Peace&Love...
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I FEEL THE MOTIONS OF EMOTIONAL BLISS
    AND THE SINGLE KISS OF GOODBYE
    GURL ITS TYME TO FLY MY SKIES OF LOVE
    TO RENEW YA HEART .....TOO TYGHT FLOW ON!
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister~

    I don't know about a masterpiece...but I thank you
    for reading ME, and for the comps!

    Much :heart:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA~

    Girl this piece does expose the soul - doesn't it?
    Glad you could relate!!
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey $$RICH$$

    Where's my boading pass...and frequent flyer miles?!

    Thank you dear ... Much :heart:
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this heah definitely pulls at my heart strings because i too overstand this. lovely flow. lovely end to that kind of situation cuz how else could it be said, you know?
    -7
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhh WF 7

    Sistahs keep it tight like this here...
    we need closure... even if the letter
    never reaches its planned destination, we
    still need to write about our feelings
    in an effort to release them -- to move
    forward into our Second Progression; if you will!

    Thank you for reading me this a.m.
     
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