Black Poetry : To Touch The Sky

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybble7, Mar 21, 2006.

  1. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You child…
    In the rugged hands of the sun don the blossom red and brown
    Kirlian colors that radiate and kiss the clouds
    Earthen shoes that reach deep beneath the soil
    You child…
    Soul flower born to bask in the golden rays of wisdom
    Birthed to drink the rains of manifold sorrow
    that saturate the otherwise dry and barren plains
    Even drown much of that which is land bound
    Yet the deluge merely seeps into your soul
    And I’m compelled to want to watch you grow
    You child…
    Babe in the brawny arms of time
    Ancient echo that slips through crevice and shade
    Sweet song of salvation borne upon the distant mountains
    that claim the hazy horizon even whisper redemption
    to the weary sojourner who seeks to find their way
    You child…
    Clad in the dust of a hundred lifetimes that line
    the precarious paths that speak the journey
    of trials and tribulations
    For you have run the rough roads of forever
    You child…
    Are the glow beneath the heavy lids of a woeful day
    That slowly slips away
    Rest within the womb of understanding
    Nurtured within the patient slumber that regenerates the soul
    Chanting a tome of transformation and due season
    The unfinished story secreted within your silken chamber
    You child…
    You got heaven in your eyes
    And you were born to touch the sky…

    Map ‘06
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    reaching and looking upward ......tyte flow
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i waz feelin yo flo, so keep floin wit nonstop, and yes my child u were borned 2 write gud poetry

    blackluv and bp
     
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    Skrybble, keep your poetic head to the sky.

    You're flying high!
     
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    man i cant keep up with you, you laid out this trap and i followed. i should be asking you for pointers. this was deep and full of emotions. skrybble you got it going on my brotha. keep up the good flo's, flo on poet.:smooch:
     
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    This was so serious skryb
    This justifies two looks
    I was really feeling this
    Much love poet
     
  7. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich. Much love brah.

    Thanks GhettoAmbition. Much love to ya.

    Thanks 1Poet man. Appreciate the love. Much love.

    Thanks Nevar. Naw, you still run circles around me. lol Much love to ya.

    Thanks Tant man, Much love to ya brah.

    Thanks fam for feelin' me.
    One love
     
  8. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know you dont believe in this but i would pop your collar for this. cause your an amazing writer. you got some spunk to ya know. ok. ok.:smooch:
     
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    Hi skrybble7
    I want to say that your poems are fly
    This flow runs with a wonderful ease
    that make one take a deep breathe
    just to take more in
    and then exhale it slowly
    very refreshing
    very cool :)


    Peace Always
     
  10. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nevar, haha I go 'head and pop it one time just cause you told me to.
    Much love my poetic sistah.

    Bluewater, I appreciate your poetic response for real.
    Much love to ya.
     
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