Black Poetry : To Thy Virgin......Mother may i

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Move freely as dayz of da bay
    live da life as purity untouched lay
    laughter of love as one play
    gether ye buds while u may
    as ole tymes lingers by day

    Ye forth art thy flower
    pure sweet and happy hour
    as love unspoken now shower
    into secrecy of thy morrow
    i so hold u close beside da glory

    Our heavens of da lamp loomz
    singing a ray of clean tunes
    under da fallen skies upon ye moonz
    where we lost our virginty soon
    yet let me be as i am
    mother may i stall and delay

    Keep me in da grasp of your soul
    so my untouched story be told
    my irgin heart is real
    save me keep me instilled
    from da things my body may feel
    mother may i

    That age is best while it's first
    not locked under such sinful curse
    where youth and blood is warm
    be not coy yet use yo time
    to such boldly shine

    while ye may go marry
    at the helmz of thy farries
    my wish is to stay as i am
    untouched pure & forever tarry
    to succeed in da angel of fairy

    Mother may i ......................


    Whom so had da rites to an Virgin that one be denounced pure
    noone should be corrupted by da dirty deed and smelly lay of
    an beast beyond da doors lurking nor should one be striped of it's
    virginity..........let he/she be .........Dancin wit da wolves


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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A child should have the right to stay innocent in that way, until he or she makes that decision, not under force. You took us into that world that should never be tampered with. Well done, poet.
     
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    sho nuff right sista watz thankz for the read and visit
     
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    Most of us where our hearts on our sleeves, when it comes to our babies, so I can well relate to this piece poet. We're in dire need ..To bring the VILLAGE back.:uzi:
     
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    yes indeed queent a deep place down in da valley we got to rise up
    so we can protect our little one's better , to see them through da tymes
    of today and asure there safety from virgin busters .....who has da rites !

    NO ONE !
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful flow rich
    keep doing ur thang
     
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    Thank u dearly for da visit and love shown on dis one .....
     
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    i felt this piece very descriptive and had a lot of imagery. Yes this innocence should remain as long as possible if not until marriage
     
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    yes SassySammy one's child should be protected
    given a chance to last as long as possible ............
     
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    wow

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