Black Poetry : To THE .....TO THE...TO THE....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Blkthunder, Aug 12, 2003.

  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To the Truth Seeks leave no stone unturned
    Set fire to knowledge yet let no book burn

    To the Watchers , keep the windows in your tower clean
    Perfect your spotlight so it shines like a lazer beam

    To the Prayerful forget not the ignorant souls
    Extract from the subconsciousits mythic gold

    To those who keep the lamp of light lit
    Burn the midnight oil and never quit

    To the intuitives whose knowledge is from the heart
    Continue to share your words with those in the dark

    To those who prose and compse what ordinary language cannnot contain
    You speak for us all when you express things so plain
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow! Tyte flow. so perfectly scribed:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very tyte flow

    u scribe a piece of truth and reality
    dis was beautifully pose'd :)
     
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    yes indeed this was so eloquently worded...I would LOVE to hear this spoken :)
     
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    DAAAAAMN! I really dig it!
    The not only is the flow tight, but empowering and enlightening to boot! Flow 'head on SISTA

    "What greater way to strengthen our race, than to respect the
    queens who give life to it" - El Haaj Malik El Shabazz
     
  6. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankx-I'm a BROTHER-thankx
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had to read this a couple of times to absorb your message,
    and aside from it being a great flow, it made me think of all the different types of poets that we have on this forum and how
    each of us kinda fit into one of these categories.

    Nice flow,
    Angelicsage
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    motivational and tyte!
     
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    this was tyte...big props on dis o1
     
  10. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nniicccee...keep flowing j.