Black Poetry : To the talented poets who contributed to our scenario thread...THANK YOU!!!

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Within this thread, we'll let our ink flow to all types of different themes. Have fun!!! :darts:


    First Scenario...
    Okay poets let's read every creative line, that flows when you let your screen name shine. Here's a piece I wrote in 2004....

    It's Not Easy Being Watz

    It's not easy being Watz
    But somebody's gotta do it
    It might as well be me
    What's in a name?
    What meaning is contained
    in a moniker which
    cannot easily be explained?
    No one name, nor two,
    nope, not even three
    can even come close
    to capturing you, or me
    What's behind my name?
    Just check out my flows,
    cause those words hit paper
    depending on how the wind blows
    If an ill wind is upon me
    that makes me feel bad, I may
    want to flow it sad, mad, or even glad
    that it was a life lesson learned,
    not merely a horrible experience had.
    It's not easy being Watz
    But somebody's gotta do it
    It might as well be me
    Poets have said my flows are
    deep, so what should my name be then?
    We already have a poet named deepy
    and she digs chasms with her pen
    I've been said to shed some wisdom
    when my flows come up to bat
    But we already have a sage, and
    an angelic one at that
    It's not easy being Watz
    But somebody's gotta do it
    It might as well be me
    So, I'll just stick with my name Watz,
    it's meant to keep ya guessing
    And keep flowing and growing
    Lord knows I don't need to be stressing
    And I'll keep reading and replying,
    drop me some lines, I'll drop you a few
    I've sure grown to love, the talented poets
    comfortably living in the Destee crew
    It's not easy being Watz
    But somebody's gotta do it
    It might as well be me....
    Releasing
    Trying to stay free.....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WHAT IT'S LIKE TO BE ME

    What it's like to be

    the mystery man of poetry
    the one from above
    the $$RICHNE$$ of love
    one wit da cascading charm
    deep pleasure dat brings no harm
    my flow is deep and sweet
    when i create ur seep

    Da
    R...is richly embraced
    sensual when looked upon thy face
    my heart is easy to trace
    when u step inside my space

    My name comes through darkness of night
    shine bright as da day light
    the Name that's alwayz in flyte
    and spit lyrics that's jaw droppin tyte

    $$RICH$$ is a poet like 2 doves
    poetry is what he truely hugs
    a brother of compassion u can rub
    a King da master of blissful love

    see my name is that i am
    what i am and to be
    one who's mind alwayz free
    one who love's him some Destee

    never forget his dear QueenT
    as i cross da maze of watz
    to the clear bluewater under
    da purplemoons as i feel yes
    Hopelisromantic in joy
    is what u need to know about
    da mystery man of $$RICH$$

    Not some fat dollar bill
    but a lover to keep u thrill
    send ya body in a winter chill
    somebody gotta be me
    so here i am all that u see
    yep Little ole Richie.
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cool-Refreshing-BlueWater

    The BlueWater is cool and refreshing
    for she is more then a flow
    Traveling from West Africa
    To these eastern shore.

    The BlueWater is cool and refreshing
    A current freeing the mind
    She rides the tide and becomes the tide
    Casting doubts aside

    Cool and refreshing is BlueWater
    A wave that rolls to shore
    Never the same, when she comes
    And never the same when she goes.

    The Coolness flows with BlueWater
    They are one in the same
    A woman who heart reaches out to all
    Because her love is untame


    Cool
    Refreshing
    Blue Water
     
  4. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umm...RAW

    Well, I'm just going to comment and say this poem is so HOT,Mayn! woohee!!

    Anyways, I'm going to come back!hahaha

    Desert Storm
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coming from tha Desert Sands of Les Nubians
    Bringing enlightenment and enchantment like Makeda
    With incense of goodness

    The inspirations of camels press through caravans of travelers
    This lifes journey reflects lost kingdoms of Greatness
    The mothers and fathers OF AFRICA
    A legacy of teachers, faith healers, buisiness owners and artists
    A history of beauty, love, depth, determination, and perservance

    By storm we struggle to survive
    I represent a people of soul strength
    Of words unspoken but still ALIVE

    I BRING THE PASSION~

    From the palace of King Tut
    To the oasis of Cleopatra
    Relive an era of Kings and Queens
    Princeses and Princesses
    Learners and Scholars
    Sons and daughters
    Like eagles they sore to define
    Their divine intellect and MAJESTY
    Eloquent HUMAN NATURE
    Producing modern day Royal African civilizations of
    Meneleks,Makedas,Nzinghas,Idris and Aloomas

    I am hypnotic, capturing, a fanatic
    I am esteemed, fearfully, and wonderfully made
    By a CREATOR that knows ALL things
    My harmony rises in the sweet melodies of SPIRITUALS
    HUMMING, like a mother holding her child close to her breast
    Bringing protection and comforting her
    My words of thought pose questions asking WHY?, My Revelations cause my heart to leap like the sunrise
    The heart language that lingers
    With a head held up high

    The carnavals and hypnotic trances
    That synchronize
    My Africana Diaspora echoes and summons
    My Caribbean cousins
    My Island lovers
    My European Kin
    And my Middle Eastern/Asian descent

    We have left on the hearts and minds of the world
    Our everlasting Strength, ELUMINATING imprint

    We are the beauty of EARTH's BEAUTY
    In these words
    Do I carry precious seeds
    My burden
    Burned and weighed so heavily
    And in this
    I am continually giving BIRTH
    Through living words
    I AM PREGNATED by
    WORTH

    DESERT STORM
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow poets!
    Rich your piece shined the light on your I am what I am philosophy, as well as your adoration of the Destee family.
    Bluewater your scribe flowed with such serenity, I could envision a wave flowing in, and back out.
    Desert Storm, I envisioned a regal caravan crossing as I read your piece.

    Superb, all of you!!!
     
  7. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Something Beyond Love

    Keita is my own special brand,
    the dream of mystic women, the fear of every man.
    You search for words, but none are real,
    to convey the ecstasy I make you feel...
    to express the chills you can't forget...
    to know that it's me who keeps you wet.

    You fit me like a second skin...
    and seep thru my pores like original sin...
    as I suck up your soul with ancient desires,
    and blaze thru your thighs with love
    hotter than fire...
    Your sheets of sweat seem like a dream,
    as each and every drop dissipates to steam

    Even the angels are shielding the eyes of God,
    from the passion evoked as you engulf my rod.
    Back arched, thighs trembling, love unfurled...
    toes curled,
    as you give birth to me, deep from within,
    with waves of wetness over and over again.

    Sobbing, weeping, sighing, crying...
    love so good you're one step from dying.
    Yes, you're mines completely,
    but then I'm also yours...
    a slave, king and lover, a freak and your whore.
    You keep me hard, then you keep me sore,
    like a junkie in need, always craving you more.

    And as I look in your eyes...
    filled with mystic black doves...
    I realize then, this is something beyond love!!!
    So when you ask who I am it's very plain to see,
    I'm something beyond love I'm your deepest fantasy.
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, so Keita goes beyond love, seeps into your pores, tempts you, takes you prisoner, mind, body, and soul. It's easy for a reader to get swept away in these words. Masterfully penned poet.
     
  9. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Platinumillity1

    Let's Begin with a Beginning
    The one that begins with P

    That name I created

    Miss PLATINUMILLITY.....One

    Platinum is a biggest
    Huge in all forms
    nothing but the goodness
    Just imagine Your Hearts Warmth

    Taken to the Top
    The Highest of Stock
    Claiming Like the Greatness
    God's Personal Flock

    Yes she is Platinum
    The Platinum Plaque
    Plat ways She waves

    So you can feel more than Bronze
    more than Silver
    Tops Gold
    Like a Diamond Just Minerally

    PLATINUMILLITY1
    Lets Break it down
    Platinum-Grade A+ and Higher
    Illity with two ways interchangeably

    Ility like my ability
    maybe to stay on top
    or maybe it's being the most PLATINUM ABILITY OF ME

    Illity Lets make number 2
    Now I have to say......
    This is me strictly Smuggly
    PLATINUMILL as in MILLS

    Straight to the top Baby!
    Still with Ability
    That leaves us One.....1

    ~PLATINUMILLITY1~
    It speaks for itself
    No need to Proceed
    So...when someone asks about this name
    You Know that is me

    And All My.......Ability........


    :10500:
    :D
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And you took it to the apex with that flow Platinum, those lines glistened with sparkle and luster, just like you do. Loving it, sis!

    You poets are AMAZING!!! Okay, who's next?
     
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