Black Poetry : To the painter (she knows who she is)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There, South from here lies
    a woman whom my mental
    cannot seem to connect with /my
    heart still / walks 75 miles to see/
    be with her but she ain't answering the
    door.....and I sleep with
    my eyes open because I wait for
    it's return /
    eye fear the nightmares that
    she may spraypaint on the insides
    of my cranial cavity and
    my thoughts will be rotted.........
    and my soul will be left to
    fester under a sun that
    refuses to rise...........................

    and she wants me to pose
    for her painting...I wonder
    can she deal with
    a crying picture?

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERB DON'T GIVE UP OR IN FORTH
    SHE DA PAINTER SHELL HEAR WIT KEEN EAR
    STAY AT PEACE AND SLEEP BY DAY LIGHT
    HER VOICE U WILL HEAR
    CRYING PICTURE OF LOST LOVE
    WOW!!!!
    MAN I LOVE THIS PIECE...................TALK TO MY EAR AGAIN:eek:
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was brooding
    and sad
    and vacant...
    i love sad poems too!
    thank you...
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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