Black Poetry : TO THE ONE I SECRETELY ADMIRE...

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  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MAYBE...

    Maybe we should be together...
    Maybe we should both say never...
    Maybe this was meant to be...
    Maybe kills both you and me...
    Maybe you should be my baby...
    Maybe I'm just going crazy...
    Maybe time won't fix a thing...
    Maybe you should wait and see...
    Maybe not...Maybe so...
    Maybe we will never know...

    Maybe there ain't nothin to it...
    Maybe we should both say screw it...
    Maybe if you wait to long..
    Maybe I'll realize that you were wrong...
    Maybe I'm not in your fate...
    Maybe I found you much to late...
    Maybe love don't care one bit...
    Maybe love is full of ****...
    Maybe we should walk the aisle...
    Maybe then you'd find your smile...
    Maybe not...Maybe so...
    Maybe we will never know...

    Maybe we should seize the moment...
    Maybe we should freeze and hold it...
    Maybe we should run away...
    Maybe "away" is a better place...
    Maybe friends is not enough...
    Maybe lovers is way too much...
    Maybe the time just isn't right...
    Maybe wait to tell you one more night...
    Maybe now...Maybe never...
    Maybe can go on forever...

    Maybe things will improve...
    Maybe it's all up to you...
    Maybe love is confused for lust...
    Maybe faith is confused with trust...
    Maybe time is of the essence...
    Maybe time is teaching us a lesson...
    Maybe we have found each other...
    Maybe you will find another...
    Maybe not...Maybe so...
    Maybe we will never know...

    Maybe I have said too much...
    Maybe I haven't said enough...
    Maybe dreams come true, Perhaps???
    Maybe without you my dreams collapse...
    Maybe we can wait no longer...
    Maybe love will grow much stronger...
    Maybe not...Maybe so...
    Baby we already know...

    The time is now...No maybe's quoted...
    To you alone... My heart's devoted...
    So take my hand and call me Baby...
    Cause without you ____...I'm stuck on maybe...


    This was written for a member of Destee's family that I've caught feelings for through his words. SHHHHHHHHHH it's a secret. If you know don't tell!!!!:love: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, Alize.......................got me floored with this piece and then u leaving me hangin with the mystery...........Who Could It Be? Let's See who could I eliminate.......:huh:
     
  3. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you guess right I just might tell you........:wink:
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't know if this man is claimed and I'm not one for drama...His words have touched me like I never felt before. Stirred something in my soul that I didn't know was there. Don't even know anything beyond what his pen tells me...But something about him has me trippin!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...haven't seen him in here in awhile!!!
     
  5. Clio_the_Muze

    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    P.S...... I'm feeling this....
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Clio. I hope he will too.
     
  7. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say my name! lol- loving the intrigue.
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got it,I got it,I got it,I got it,I got it,.......................But I'm not telling not for everyone to see, that is, and yes I must agree his words are Maaad Deep! Oooooooooh, Alize!:angel1:
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't kiss and tell!!!

    I feel you on this Alize!!!!
    Believe it or not, i'm in ur same position!!!
    But he knows who he is!!!! :lol:

    :x: To the 1 I like, shhhhh!! Don't say anything about this!!! :x:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice poem....I think I know who it tis...but I won't say nuttin!!!!! LOL!!! :) :) :) :) :laugh:
     
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