Black Poetry : To The One I Love

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  1. Sodwn2earth

    Sodwn2earth Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby, you are so amazing to me, so beautiful.
    I love you equal to my want and need of you; synonomous.
    You make me want to be less selfish and judgemental,
    your expirences want me to give everyone a chance.
    I would be without hope and strength if God hadn't placed you in my life,
    so alone.
    I'm so in awe of you, your unwavering dedication.
    You are so much more then I ever thought possible.
    Ever.
    I held out hope for you but it was growing thin,
    finally a glimmer of a wish, a glimpse of a dream.
    But yet here you are
    solidly real
    unbeliveably beautiful
    in all your pain, your triumphs, your despair, and elation.
    So human yet so........so......
    I can't wait to share my life with you,
    to bask in your glow
    to be one with my most admired individual.
    Thank you for wanting me
    for caring
    guiding me to your heart and showing me all you have to offer.
    Thank you for opening yourself unto me
    even to hurt.
    Thank you for trusting me and believing in me
    offering hope when I had none.
    The Lord must be truly aswome if you are a creation of his likeness.
    Bring your soul to me baby and let me bathe in it's radiance
    become one with its essence.
    You radiate a state of mind, of being that I wish to reach and share with you.
    Forgive me for being unlearned.
    But wiith your patience, I know I will learn quickly.
    My devotion to you is unwavering
    our love the most formidable weapon against the world.
    I shall be your friend
    your lover
    your wife
    the mother of your children
    your lifetime companion.
    I shall.
    I am up for this challenge with you and only you.
    I am so simply yours.
    And you are so simply.....
    mine.
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ..........And that was simply fabulous work. Beautiful piece Sodwn:spinstar:
     
  3. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    A amazing piece...and a excellent dedication...very fluid...

    we should all feel this way towards our loved one.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweetly pose'd and beautifully expressed
     
  5. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :welldone: Loved the way you put that down...you and whoever this is for are blessed to have found each other.
     
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