Black Poetry : To the man who abused me.........

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a painful story I will tell
    I will tell you a story of a little girl who's life hasn't gone so well

    Little girl lost without her father
    The only thing she had was her mother

    Mother had to work so she was left with a friend
    Mother trusted her because she was someone she could depend

    On
    Left her alone

    Many times
    Dimes

    Were few
    She had to work to get her daughter something new

    Then one night her life had changed
    How because the monster decided to mess with her
    He decided to play
    She didn't know what to do or say

    He touched her and she didn't know what to do
    She was seven what could she do

    Scream
    Fight
    Kick

    She remain quiet didn't make a sound
    And then the weight of him on her pound for pound

    Touching
    Rubbing
    Touching
    Rubbing
    Stroking

    Crying
    Wishing
    Silently saying
    Stop
    Please
    Please
    Dont hurt me

    But her cries were never heard
    Little did she know her life was to be filled with curves

    Because he decided to take advantage of her
    Mother couldn't understand why her daughter was in so much pain
    Night after night he tried to penetrate her she became enraged

    Because he made her swear to his **** secretcy
    He needed her like a drug a dependency

    As he made her use her hands, her mouth
    Just imagine the hell she went through as he kept going south

    What could she do, where could she go?
    Her scars were deep within her she dare didn't show

    What she had been through
    Here again she's seven what could she do

    Who could she tell?

    Her mother/too busy
    Her father/never there
    Her sister/too little for help
    Her God/didn't know him at that time

    She was left alone to wrestle with her inner demons
    To be doused in his dirty semen

    This story I tell is true
    What would you do?
    I wish I could kill the man that hurt her
    Made her life a living hell
    Justice to her hasn't been served
    She didn't deserve
    Any of this
    Punching the walls with my fist
    I wish I could face the man who

    Abused me........

    Copyright 2007
    Nevar
     
  2. robboy2003

    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish I could face him for the child in this!

    Brotha Robb luvs this as I love about all you write.

    Peace, luv, and Harmony! :thanks: :thanks: :welldone:
     
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    :cry:. Very touching poem. So much pain is being forced on sistas. Stay strong!

    HTPU
     
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    There is nothing words can say
    when a young gurl been delt this way
    taken like a thief in da night
    for all the wrong and painful sights
    stolen virginity scared for life
    unable to understand the play of this man
    who abused and misused thy child at hand
    If i could cuddle and care for her i would
    if i could give her virginity back i would
    if i could lift her spirit from these pains
    and clean up such nasty stains i would
    to reasure she never did wrong
    just taken by his yearn so filty and stank
    i could break is ...into pieces limb by limb
    for tampering wit such pure jem
    but words can't express enough

    This one painful scribe that has touch my heart
    and made me mad all at the same time that leaves
    me to say so sorry , so sorry for the pain / hurt
    no need to have any shame she was only seven !
    unaware unknown and didn't understand ............
    I weep in da secrecy of her morrow .

    Da things our sistas have to deal with in life is uncompared
    Peace & healing
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to all who have showed me their love on this painful piece. stay blessed and be blessed!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The scribe itself, you brought us into the mind of the abused innocent very well. Some things are hard to find words for, but I'll say, you continue to rise, no matter how low someone attempted to bring you down. Peace.
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watz for the support of this piece. may through this will others pay attention to the ones that need them the most!
     
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