Black Poetry : To the Ladies in the house...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Agentshaft007, Apr 23, 2002.

  1. Agentshaft007

    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Entitled: "SHE"

    She…
    Beautiful like sunrise
    Gentle like the breeze that blows with it

    She…
    Who’s voice sings soft
    Riffs and melodies to my heart
    When She speaks

    She…
    Laughs and Giggles and Smiles
    To brighten the darkest of rooms

    She…
    Her whole being holds me
    Captive
    To her cell with her holding the
    Only key to my heart

    She…
    Soft…Gentle
    Like that of the petals of
    Roses in bloom

    She…
    The warm embrace like a
    Soothing…
    Comforting…
    Angel’s wings

    She…
    Captivates me
    Motivates me
    Nurtures and Stimulates me
    Inspires me
    Compliments me
    Sharpens me
    Entices and Co-writes me
    Because…she…
    Is truly…
    Special …
    To me…
    Because Her love completes…
    Me
    And Fulfills…
    Me…She means the world to me.
    :jumping:

    mmuuuaahh
    Agent
    copyright 2002
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Niccccce! A very nice
    and enjoyable read.
    May we have more? :)

    Scribeaboutit!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  3. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Yeah this piece us Tyte!!

    Supa Tyte!! fo da Ladies!! I dig!:D
     
  4. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Very nice.
    The piece has a great flow.
    I'm no romantic, but hey, I think every girl wants to be loved like that.
    Good work.
    *Emma*
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling the love man
    deep love here
    with depth if you may
    for someone special?

    i know stupid question

    dssnY
     
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