Black Poetry : To The Girlfriend

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  1. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am sorry to have caused you grief
    But the way you act is beyond belief
    Get a grip, FEMALE, I don't want your man
    Not trippin at all, cause if I wanted I can
    Take him, rock his mind and give him back to you
    I know all about the drama you put him thru.
    Can you not overstand that we are only friends
    And will still be when your relationship ends
    I know you're insecure; but well, you're young
    That tired song you're singin' now I've already sung
    But unfortunately you're so jealous your ears are shut
    And you think I'll stop, I ain't afraid of you, but
    Little girl, if you give me a chance you might find out
    That I am not the female that you should worry about
    You know the "new friends" that have worked to befriend YOU
    I bet that you didn't know why. And Who
    They really are after is YOUR loving man, so see,
    Worry about them don't worry about me
    Your man, my FRIEND, however, it may seem
    Is very unhappy with you, stop living a dream.
    Your ranting and raving makes run to tell me
    Then I put back his pieces and set him free
    And never once do I say leave, I say be strong
    ****, you make a person wonder how he's stood you so long
    Look dear, a baby should not be a reason for marriage
    And it became one, yours would be fit to disparage
    I am the reason that what you have didn't end
    And when YOU are gone, I will still be just his friend
    No disrespect intended, no offense should be taken
    But this is a message to a mind that should awaken
    And be enlightened to the fact that I am finding it ironic
    That you are the only one allowed relationships labeled platonic.

    Get over yourself.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now

    one can get stuck on self and yet be missing da point!
    I feel ya here
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for understanding

    So many times people get jealous over nothing...
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    INDEED

    in most cases it's alwayz ova nothing
    sometime they just be buggin' or had a bad day
    that turn into a master destruction !
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amen to that!!

    or unnecessary disaster! Always welcoming your input!
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ain't this the truth!

    Insecurity is a bad thing! Good job poet!
     
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    Well Uhh..

    I guess you told her now didn't you! lol Im feelin you. Tight

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
  8. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this

    I've been here...on both sides. Thanks for telling it like it is...sometimes, out of that insecurity you talk about, females get stupid. Steady overlooking what really going onnnn...

    Tellatruth!

    SWT
     
  9. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad y'all feel me

    ShadeeLadee- lol, both sides huh?? I guess to some degree, so has everyone!! Thanx for the read!

    Reas-
    You always give me so much love :kiss:


    Danilyn- Thank you for the read!! You are tyght yoself!!!
     
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