Black Poetry : To Spend Forever

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by showfer, Jan 18, 2004.

  1. showfer

    showfer Member MEMBER

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    I give you my heart
    Mind, body and soul,
    I give you my love
    For you make me whole.
    I give you this promise
    The promise to try,
    I give you each breath
    And the tears I cry.
    I give you my past
    My future and now,
    I give you my thoughts
    My hope and this vow.
    To give you my voice,
    And the music I sing,
    I give you forever,
    I give you this ring.
    I give you my world,
    All the pain and strife,
    I give you my hand
    Learn to share my life.
    I give you this kiss
    And these words I say,
    "I'll cherish you always
    As of this day."
    I give you my faith
    That these words are true,
    For today, I swear,
    To spend my life with you.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very warm and beautiful for the heart of love
    is the key to greatness and everlasting
    flow on i'm loving ya scribes
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like wedding vows....this was very sweet and pure.
     
  4. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful. lovely display of feelings
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm with watzinaname...a wedding ceremony was the picture i got when i read this...very beautiful words and very beautifully written...much love to you.
     
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