Black Poetry : TO PAINT A PICTURE

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  1. Zen Master_1

    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One must feed their hungry inner-soul.
    Deep within the depths of you stands a door.
    How many times have you reached that point in dreams?
    Your human factor wants control but does not nourish your true being.

    Yet, your urge to feast becomes a strong intense desire.
    Finally, in your sleeping state the door stands before you, again.
    In your quietness of your dream, you reach out to turn the doorknob.
    Open, you stride over the threshold, and then you drop, as your mind battles for control.

    A voice you hear then said, "Relax and enjoy the banquet of beauty within you."
    Your journey with intense perfumes and undertones illuminates their glorious brightness.
    Subconsciously, your inner-soul is now full from its once starvation, now sees the details.
    The voice encourages you to allow yourself the real freedom to express boldly and pure.
    Yes, even I can feel the beauty you want to express, so paint knowing I am observing.
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh I'm diggin' your technique.

    It's like when U write, it's a respected uncle speaking 2 me, someone close that has been where I'm going.

    Knowing that U observe, I can create masterpieces.

    Keep inspiring us, brother.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THIS WAS MASTERED TOO SMOOTH LOVIN DIS SCRIBE
     
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    very nice..i likes
     
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    relax and let the inner beauty grow
    feeling you on this
    Nice
    Peace
     
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