Black Poetry : TO MY WIFE...TSWANA

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  1. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    If it walks and talks like a man... that's how!

    Peace and healing brother, sister queen.
     
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    this was so deep and worthy as i felt every river of love
    flowing from this here peace and togetherness forever upon
    da two souls .......surely she will love this here brutha K.....
     
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    Something has to be said for putting your heart on the page, which you did. Much can be worked out brotha. Peace to you and yours.
     
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    Much love brother man. I hope everything works out between you and your empress...
     
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    very deep emotions hope all comes well with you
    this was like the depth of ones heart to another
    very tight and meaningful drop

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Oh my Keita...
    My heart and soul overflows
    with tears...
    as I listen to these words
    bleed and cry for the justice
    of love and the rekindling
    of a fire that burns so
    deeply between two...
    perfectly designed for each other
    ...so deep it hurts

    and to Tswana, I have always praised your wisdom
    and ability to write poetry that
    strikes like lightning in the soul...
    leaving the mind and spirit paralyzed
    beneath it's power...

    She is blessed to have a man that not
    only conveys his love openly to the world
    but also...takes ownership of any
    shortcomings and kneels at the feet
    of his Queen for reconciliation...

    My heart is so full...
    This was so beautiful...
    so...so...beautiful

    Love, Peace and Blessings to you both !
    Sage
     
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    this scribe saddens me greatly...
    the only thing i really know in life...
    is that some things granted by God
    are worth fighting for...
    worth dying for...
    i hope the light shines on you both...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    still feeling dis beautiful piece to a QUEEN ....
     
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    I can never relay to you brotha keita the respect i have for you especially for this peace
    You and sister queen and beacons in your own rite
    and I am honored to read the wisdom that flows from the fountains of your knowledge
    May you both find the peace of mind you seek...together :grouphug:
     
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