Quiet Poetry Lounge : to my unfound love*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Sep 19, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweetheart--

    u complete what most can't comprehend--
    you surpass what most fulfill to--
    the
    level of
    mediocrity--
    you make me see you--
    differently--
    every time i see you--
    differently--
    mentally--
    in spirit--
    physically--
    you are chain reactions to--
    my biology
    anatomy--
    and chemistry
    you equal infinite affection--
    mathematically--
    and leave me--
    speechless
    verbal-ly
    ........................why else wouldn't i sing your praises--
    i
    love you
    need you
    want you
    you're special--
    and
    far beyond--
    what most find to be their :spinstar: (star)
    unparalled--
    and i'll never let you go
    once
    i
    find
    you.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!

    very beautiful , warm and touching
    she would love reading this one ...flow softly som' mo!!!:D :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    back for a revisit
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was so sweet and loving, just genuinely touching. Beautiful flow.
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww ..


    awww..


    and again aww..



    this is beautifull ...





    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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