Black Poetry : ...to my unborn child...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To my unborn child…

    I’ll never know you…
    But I’ll forever love you…


    You were this tiny life inside of me
    I had such dreams and hopes for us to see
    I never even got to hear you cry
    And I’ll never get to hear your breathly sighs
    At night I toss and turn in hurt alone
    As my man tenderly whispers, “be calm”

    You were this tiny baby inside of me
    The first I thought there would ever be
    But God told me it was not so
    As he claimed your life and kept my own
    It hurts so bad, worse than the chemo
    The thoughts so sad that you’re here no mo’

    You were this tiny breath inside of me
    And I can’t bare the thoughts without controling
    My emotions and bittersweet tears
    The ones that roll down my cheeks in fear
    There’s nothing anybody can say or do
    To erase this indelible pain I’m going through
    I know I’m young and that there is still time
    But why is everything taken from me at this time?

    Except for my husband…
    And except for my life…


    To my unborn child…
    I love you more than life…
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes this really make my heart rumble from da love
    of an unborn
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man, that was deep and emotional. I'm crying in my heart. This poem truly touched me in ways you'll never know. Keep hope alive because your husband needs you too. Oh, and is this from a true life experience? If so, you are truly in my prayers. I wouldn't know how you would feel inside but I can only imagine.

    Much Love,
    Foxy.............
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich, i'm glad i could touch your emotions....

    foxy lady...this is a very recent real life experience...i had a miscarriage...and the pain is still lingering....i need your prayers...thanks so much...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sistah u truely took me by storm
    i feel you and the pain it leaves
    but only God has the true answers and comfort
    my prayer reach out to touch u in every way
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We've missed your words gurl. You are in my prayers like always. Keep coming back and blessing us with your heart-filled words. Much love to you and yours.:heart:
     
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    Lovely, some experiences in life we never understand, we simply
    have to put our questions, fears, our everything in God's hands.

    You truly touched me on this, I can relate to this poem more than
    you know. My prayers of healing and consolation are with you.
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much everybody....
     
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    you got me cryin Lovely, Im so sorry for your loss. But God has a plan in store for you sweetie :heart: Always believe that
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sorry i made u cry girl:(...lol, anyway thanks for the encouraging words...
     
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