Black Poetry : To My Secret Valentine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Feb 11, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The feel of romance dances in the air
    When consume by the waves of love everywhere

    Like a dove flying free
    Gliding gently on the breeze

    The sun ray’s beams on the morning dew
    Secret thoughts shared between two

    A mental picture, a connection made
    That warms the heart in many ways

    To my secret Valentine
    Who thoughts warms my heart

    A kiss blown in the breeze
    To your heart from my thoughts

    Forever you will be in my heart
    forever apart of my thoughts

    There is more I want to say
    I will leave that for another day:wink:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was sweetly posed Blue, enjoyed reading this.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful my sister just wonderful
    likes the flow indeed....
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your thoughts of your secret valentine are deep sure hope he can read your mind...lol
    that was a very nice piece...do enjoy that day. :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as the paper is turned ova
    here what it read...........
    upon u like glazing starz
    the instill indingo love of
    sweet feeling so much to
    say but secretly a rose on
    valentine day a chocolate
    kiss and solo heart
    this where we start
    so i save the rest for
    another day wishing u
    beloveth happy valentine day
     
  6. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Must be nice to have a secret Valentine...

    Tyte' sweet Write
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this reminds me of 3rd grade
    drop'n off valentines day cards
    signed
    secret admirer...i like this....very sweet
    one love
    khasm
     
  8. ckei

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    Cool thread...

    The Queen of my Nile, the nutrients of your love I desire,
    Quench my thirst, wet me to drown my raging fire.
    Submerge me deeply, far into the nether regions of your love,
    encompass my essence, of you I can never get enough.
    A numbness invades my soul, pure pleasure takes over,
    I succumb to the Ecstasy of giving my all to you, my lover.
    Why must we be apart, separated by such a distance?
    Nevertheless, you will be mine again, nothing will change my persistence.

    peace
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW...sista blue...gurlllllllllllllllllll
    ya don did it again :)
    and ckei response...wow again lol
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister this was wonderful...
    and Ckei...."wow"...
    that was some response...

    Blue... :toast:
     
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