Black Poetry : To My Poetic Other

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jazzymoonchild, Jun 8, 2004.

  1. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    come out, come out
    don't hide from me
    you're my favorite lyrical sparing partner
    the shade to my tree
    stay sprung on my words
    as if I were your first
    let me hydrate your senses
    quency your thirst
    Listen to
    innocent yet Purposeful
    slips of the tongue
    I'll bounce to your rhythm
    dance to your drum

    You weave words like baskets
    like the women in the Motherland
    yet remain uncalloused
    in amazement
    I sit, stare, sit
    recline
    relishing in the moment
    I may hear you recite
    another bad creation
    Spanish Fly for my ears
    consonents and vowels
    perform a tantalizing
    dance for my eyes on paper

    I-N-S-P-I-R-A-T-I-O-N

    you give me
    like the sweetest O
    my pen throbs
    like my innerwoman
    my mind is filled
    with expletives
    and
    love, lust
    friendship
    I give to you
    in appreciation
    of
    your skill

    jazzymoonchild, [email protected] 2004
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely done....
    very intersting
    as flows mix and lay
    indeed
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I particularly like these lines:
    "You weave words like baskets
    like the women in the Motherland
    yet remain uncalloused"
    The entire poem though was like a feast of words. Great.
     
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    very nice jazzy :)

    yes flow in the mix
    add text to the scribe
    releasing the views
    releasing the thoughts
    releasing what is held
    within the heart
    wonderful poem poet
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    poeticly sprayed to perfection
     
  6. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MBA :roll: :roll: glad you liked it. I was inspired that day.

    Watz :wave: You always make words appear brand new. Thank you

    Bluewater: Thanks from you is big! You make me feel calm when I read your pieces

    Brother Rich: :yo: What can I say? Blessings from you mean I am doing something right.

    Thanks to you all!! Much love

    See you all in chat soon
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so delicious jazzy.
     
  8. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the way you wrote this...very nice:)
     
  9. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Swift! Much love... :star: :star:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now your in shine on destee.com
    Poet of the week .....flow head sistah
    much welcome
     
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