Black Poetry : To my love...To whom I owe everything to..

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My love words can't describe the emotions, the feelings

    My love words no hands could ever write the true meaning of Love....

    As I watch you today on the first day of January 2008 I look upon

    a man that has truly captured me

    Captured the spirit that longs to be loved

    Your auro is breath-taking

    Your look is so unique

    I look at the scars life and time has put upon you

    Like a wild Lion devouring everything and everyone in your path

    and me a lioness with no purr

    Seeking that one to bring out the true strength behind these eyes of mine

    I've felt I've always been cheating when it comes to life

    But my life is your life and you care what seems to happen to me

    I watch you in your peaceful slumber thinking how can God allow me to have

    this creature, this man in my life

    He is everything I need and more

    I touch your skin so warming to me your energy makes me instantly smile

    I pay attention to every part of you from your hands, your lips, your eyes, to the gray that now adorn your crown

    Even has taken in the smell of your cigarettes upon your warm breathe

    My love you don't know how I am happy to be here at this moment

    I truly will treasure the revelation you had revealed to me not long ago

    The words you have spoken pierced me so that the tears behind my brown eyes

    rain forth

    You have spoken before but not like this

    The words that has come forth from your precious lips spoke of the truth and your solemn promise to me

    So far you've kept your word

    Your longing for me to stay awake to share our family moments with you and the kids

    But life of running has caught up and has taken over me

    I can't control what the body is needing which is

    rest

    Soon on July 26, 2008 will I join you in Matrimony to become the wife I had dreamed, hope for

    All my life I have pleased others and now my Heavenly Father sees fit that I deserve happiness

    real love

    real love

    real love is what we have my darling

    I wish I could stop time so I can immortalize this beautiful gift God has bestowed upon me

    I don't want for a second to lose what I have

    I don't want for a minute waste time on things I should no longer be concern

    It is you, it is I, and our three beautiful children

    Sorry love that I can't give you the one thing you want from me

    It's the gift of life

    Life I hope someday to give from our blessed union

    Oh my love, I love you, I love you, I love you

    I would take a knife and inscribed your name across my beating heart

    Because my heart has now felt the true meaning of LOVE

    As I hear you snore now my love I can't wait for the Journey that we both

    must take

    As we try to do God's will and live the life we both have always wanted

    So I thank you Father for blessing me with my family, and blessing me with this Man

    My Adam as I am his Eve

    as we both continue to live in our paradise we call

    Eden

    To my love....may our love never waiver.........may we always keep in mind that love doesn't exist in fairy tale

    But exist in this world we both now share

    Until then my love your future devoted wife

    Raven Lavette Stargill...............A.K.A. Lavette112/Nevar112..........

    Love without limits..........



    copyright 2008

    Lavette112/Nevar112
     
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    very beautiful and warm to the one u love
     
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    Nevar, this was so endearing, like your heart opened up and leaked an abundance of love all over the page. How beautiful.
     
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    Nevar, you made me feel like I was there watching you, watching him...I could feel the love, excitement and satisfaction in your words. Congratulations on your upcoming adventure together...keep us posted!
     
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    Sister Sister
    This was Beauty Beyond Words
    The Binding of love between two people is Nothing But a Blessing.......Congratulations Love....Peace and Blessings
    And Flow on.....This was Love
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Nevar.. I am sooo happy for you.....

    u make me a beleiver .... Happy New Year! :)
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for showing me some love on this piece that was from the heart now should i let this be my vows.......let me know........
     
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    HI nevar
    this is a very deep flow
    In very deeply felt.
    Keep bring it sis

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    this is the one... :)

    i read it again so i could answer the vow question...

    if someone looked me in my eyes and said that and meant it.. man i wouldn't change a word....

    ur so good at expressing love... and urself...

    by no means do u need me to say it's the right thing to say... that's no diss .... i mean u say it ma... and u say it perfectly..... u say it so sure... u say it so pure... u say it so real.... u say how u feel....

    and i'm feelin that, and I think your vows are beautiful..... and if u change them.. i'm sure anything u write will be as equally beautiful..

    love ya.... and good luck with ur future.... and good luck w/ love...
     
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