Black Poetry : To My Husband...To My God...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jun 30, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To God:

    Unto you…
    I give my life
    Unto you…
    I give my will
    Unto you…
    I give my soul
    Unto you…
    I worship til I’m old
    Unto you…
    I place my desires
    Unto you…
    I never dwell in fire
    Unto you…
    I call out your name
    Unto you…
    you do the very same
    Unto you…
    you stay with my every night
    Unto you…
    we’ve never ended in fight
    Unto you…
    I bless your holy name
    Unto you…
    I give my life the same
    Unto you…
    I thank you for my healing
    Unto you…
    I owe all my feeling
    Unto you…
    I worship and adore
    Unto you…
    I could not ask for more…


    To my husband:

    To you…
    I owe everything I am
    To you…
    I’d give everything I am
    To you…
    I’d give a beautiful child
    To you…
    I’d make love in the wild
    For you…
    I’d readily go and die
    If you…
    Were in danger in the high
    To you…
    I give the most dire love
    For you…
    I thank the man above
    Baby you…
    I love and adore
    And I…
    Don’t think I could ask for anymore...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so sweet and beautifully posed
    to thou Father & Husband
    dis kinda make we wanna hug
    love this .......
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this flow is so beautiful. Lovely G
    Peace
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so nice.
    Very beautifully written
    and expressed Lovely
    Peace to God, your husband
    and you
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely, this was so beautiful..Giving love to the man above and thwe man of your life :)
     
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    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All the love you need, right there!
     
  7. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man girl... u got me over here in tears cuz i feel every single emotion in this piece. nice flow babygirl... keep ur head up n keep fightin...
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FAITHFUL SERVANT

    Well done.
     
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    for real, i couldn't even finish the poem cuz i started crying....nuff said:toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwww rich....thanks......i just thought i should write a poem about the two most important males in my life....
     
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